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托福 作文 是托?？荚囍泻荜P(guān)鍵的一個(gè)部分，也是我國(guó)考生的一大難點(diǎn)。想要拿到托福作文高分，有必要對(duì)托福作文題目有深化的研討和理解，首要就是關(guān)于托福寫作資料的了解。今日我就給大家介紹八個(gè)?？嫉耐懈懽髡擃}觀點(diǎn)，期望能夠協(xié)助我們做好托福寫作備考。
托福作文八個(gè)萬(wàn)能論點(diǎn)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)一：健康(養(yǎng)分、放松心境、身體素質(zhì)、食品安全、生活習(xí)慣、煙酒、身體損傷、安全、生命、產(chǎn)業(yè))
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)二：便當(dāng)(節(jié)省時(shí)刻，時(shí)刻靈活，交通，休閑，文娛，吃喝，購(gòu)物)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)三：溝通(溝通技巧，與家人，爸爸媽媽，朋友，同學(xué)，搭檔，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)，網(wǎng)友溝通)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)四：習(xí)慣與心思(風(fēng)俗，習(xí)慣，愛好，親情，友情，愛情，樂趣)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)五：成就感“sense of achievement”(成功，榮譽(yù)感，財(cái)富，自傲，動(dòng)力 “motivation”(正面)，壓力 “pressure”(負(fù)面)，榮譽(yù)感“sense of honor”)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)六：環(huán)保(生態(tài)平衡，動(dòng)物植物的保護(hù)，環(huán)境污染---水，空氣，光，噪聲，輻射......生態(tài)平衡 “ecological balance”，新時(shí)期下的托福作文題目)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)七：經(jīng)濟(jì)(薪酬，收入支出，資金“fund”，出資 “investment”，節(jié)省 “save”， 旅行 “tourism”，工作 “employment”，效益 “profit”，稅收 “tax”)
托福作文全能觀點(diǎn)八：品質(zhì)(有經(jīng)歷，精干、聰明，協(xié)作，堅(jiān)忍不拔，進(jìn)步，獨(dú)立，負(fù)責(zé)任，寬恕，達(dá)觀，謙善，英勇，善良)
有經(jīng)歷：experienced...
精干：ability，capable，competent...
協(xié)作：cooperate，cooperative...
堅(jiān)忍不拔：persevere，perseverance，persevering...
進(jìn)步：aggressive...
獨(dú)立：independent...
負(fù)責(zé)任：responsibility，responsible...
寬?。簍olerate，tolerant，tolerance...
達(dá)觀：optimistic...
所謂萬(wàn)變不離其宗，托福寫作資料和觀點(diǎn)一直以這八項(xiàng)為主，同學(xué)們平常應(yīng)當(dāng)多了解這些方面的信息，把握最新的社會(huì)觀點(diǎn)常識(shí)，在托福作文題目和內(nèi)容創(chuàng)造時(shí)就可有料有據(jù)可傾。
托福寫作萬(wàn)能論點(diǎn)使用
在托?？荚嚂r(shí)，首要是時(shí)刻緊。要在半小時(shí)內(nèi)完結(jié)400字左右的 文章 ;其次，在很短時(shí)刻內(nèi)要根據(jù)標(biāo)題想出幾條支撐自個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的理由，并將其有序地組織起來，構(gòu)成文章，而且還要做到言語(yǔ)地道。所以考生很簡(jiǎn)單手忙腳亂。所以為了避免這種狀況的發(fā)生，讓考生在短時(shí)刻內(nèi)完結(jié)一篇高質(zhì)量的文章，把握一些竅門是很必要的，用的時(shí)分切忌生搬硬套，要靈活運(yùn)用。在有限的時(shí)刻內(nèi)，在確立了咱們要寫的基地觀點(diǎn)以后，就要想出幾個(gè)分觀點(diǎn)，敏捷定位，迅速進(jìn)入寫作狀況。
比方：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are putting too much emphasis on appearance and fashion. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
解這道標(biāo)題，首要從自個(gè)動(dòng)身，怎樣好寫，怎樣簡(jiǎn)單寫，去斷定自個(gè)的基地觀點(diǎn)。假如從disagree 的視點(diǎn)動(dòng)身，要從哪幾個(gè)分觀點(diǎn)去論說大家并沒有對(duì)表面和時(shí)髦putting too much emphasis 呢?考生在現(xiàn)場(chǎng)可能會(huì)抓耳撓腮，一時(shí)不知從何下手，這時(shí)咱們能夠憑借10個(gè)分類去逐個(gè)驗(yàn)證。
首要，對(duì)時(shí)髦表面的重視能夠協(xié)助咱們的Career preparation嗎?重視表面，重視時(shí)髦反映一自個(gè)的日子品嘗，自個(gè)氣質(zhì)會(huì)提高，進(jìn)而導(dǎo)致大家的重視，這自然會(huì)為自個(gè)帶來意想不到的作業(yè)時(shí)機(jī)，進(jìn)而開展自個(gè)的作業(yè)。你能夠舉例，_ 即是因?yàn)橥?duì)時(shí)髦的重視，重視表面，氣質(zhì)好，給人形象深入，而在 面試 中鋒芒畢露，成功地得到一份好的作業(yè)。
接下來從其他十個(gè)分類中，進(jìn)行迅速定位，尋找分觀點(diǎn)。國(guó)家與文明，領(lǐng)域很大，能夠打開論說。就其中的公益和慈悲方面，能夠舉例。因?yàn)榇蠹乙詴r(shí)髦的重視，還能協(xié)助他人，比方近來的“犀利哥事情”，從一個(gè)一般的漂泊乞丐，因?yàn)槠洚惡鯇こ５拇┲虬?，?dǎo)致大家的重視，進(jìn)而協(xié)助他與家人團(tuán)聚，喚起了大家對(duì)弱勢(shì)群體的重視，進(jìn)而促進(jìn)了社會(huì)調(diào)和。
第三個(gè)“健康和安全”也能用，能夠說大家對(duì)時(shí)髦表面的重視，自然會(huì)崇尚健康的護(hù)膚商品，保養(yǎng)品，要注意保持身材，就會(huì)重視健身，要穿用對(duì)大家身體好的布料做的衣服，進(jìn)而提高了人的身體健康。
第四個(gè)，經(jīng)濟(jì)。大家重視表面和時(shí)髦，就會(huì)進(jìn)行大量消費(fèi)，能夠用一組數(shù)據(jù)來證明，時(shí)髦業(yè)對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)的奉獻(xiàn)。消費(fèi)影響商場(chǎng)，進(jìn)而推進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)開展。
第五個(gè)，幸福和情感。現(xiàn)代日子的壓力越來越大，大家期望能夠放松身心，對(duì)時(shí)髦和表面的重視，能夠讓大家的身心得到愉悅，減輕作業(yè)中的壓力。大家僅僅憑借時(shí)髦來放松文娛自個(gè)，使自個(gè)的日子愈加精彩，并不是put too much emphasis。
托福作文中虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用
托福作文中虛擬語(yǔ)氣:
我們?cè)谂e例的時(shí)分常常會(huì)這么說“假如………”,”假定………..”,即if………
先不說這種舉例的好還是壞,就本身的語(yǔ)句而言,許多都是有疑問的.
托福寫作教導(dǎo) 總結(jié) 了一些if的用法,我們考前看看
先看兩個(gè)托福作文例子:
[Scenery]Sue has lost her watch. She think it may be at Ann’s house.
SUE: I think I left my watch at your house. Have you seen it?
(1) ANN: no, but I’ll have a look when I get home. If I find it, I’ll tell you.
If I find…., I’ll……
(2) Ann says: If I found a wallet in the street, I’d take it to the police.
If I found……, I’d(=I would)……..(而不是if I find, I’ll…..)
這兒兩個(gè)語(yǔ)句有著不一樣的意思,前者表明Ann覺得她有找到手表的實(shí)在也許性.因而才說if I find….., I’ll…..
而后者是徹底不一樣的狀況.在這兒Ann沒有思考實(shí)在的也許性;她在虛擬這一個(gè)托福 作文 情形,并不認(rèn)為真的能夠在街上揀到手表.所以才說:if I found……,I’d……
if I do……….和if I did………的差異
用if+曩昔式(if I found / if you were / if we didn’t等) 表明虛擬的工作,而不是指曩昔時(shí)刻發(fā)作的工作:
What would you do if you won a million pounds?
I don’t really want to go to their party, but I probably will go. They’d be offended if I didn’t go
Sarah has decided not to apply for the job. She isn’t really qualified for it, so she probably wouldn’t get it if she applied.
If從句中通常不必would:
I’d be very frightened if somebody pointed a gun at me.(而非if somebody would point)
If I didn’t go to their party, they’d be offended(而非if I wouldn’t go)
If …….would能夠表明用來懇求或人做某事:
I would be grateful if you would send me your brochure as soon as possible.
“Shall I close the door?” “yes, please, If you would.”
Would(‘d) / wouldn’t用于語(yǔ)句的主句(不是if從句)
If you took more exercise, you’d (=you would) probably feel healthier.
Would you mind if I used your phone?
I’m not tired enough to go to bed yet. I wouldn’t sleep.
別的,if引導(dǎo)的條件句也能導(dǎo)致倒裝,假如要是在作文里用到,也是一個(gè)加分點(diǎn):
先看正常語(yǔ)序.
It would be a serious setback, if the talks were to fail.
If you should need more information, please telephone our main office.
If Alex had asked, I would have been able to help.
倒裝是要省掉if
it would be a serious setback, were the talks to fail.
Should you need more information, please telephone our main office.
Had Alex asked, I would have been able to help
倒裝句比if-從句愈加正式.
但是在否定句里邊,不能夠用縮寫
e.g.
Had he not resigned, we should have been forced to sack him(不必hadn’t he…..)
再多說一下,在新托福寫作中,期望我們舉例的時(shí)分能夠?qū)憣?shí)例,因?yàn)閷?shí)例有它的特指性和唯一行,當(dāng)然,假如實(shí)在你沒有經(jīng)歷過,在舉例虛擬一個(gè)場(chǎng)景的時(shí)分, if起頭,就不要弄錯(cuò)了。
托福獨(dú)立寫作五段結(jié)構(gòu)的讓步式寫 法
托福獨(dú)立寫作思緒剖析
在寫一邊倒的文章的時(shí)分，多數(shù)考生喜歡采用經(jīng)典的五段式寫法，即開頭段、結(jié)尾段、中間三段三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)論證。這樣的寫法當(dāng)然無可厚非，但是多數(shù)學(xué)生會(huì)碰到兩個(gè)問題，一是我只能想到兩個(gè)理由，第三個(gè)理由寫不出來怎樣辦?二是我三個(gè)理由都寫完了，但是字?jǐn)?shù)不夠300字怎樣辦?這樣的狀況，就需求我們的救命稻草"退讓段"出場(chǎng)了。
什么是退讓段寫法?
退讓段，望文生義，就是退了一步的段落。例如，F(xiàn)or further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 選擇了同意的立場(chǎng)，寫完了三個(gè)同意的理由之后，能夠再寫一點(diǎn)退讓段闡述一下反方的觀念，即在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)好也很重要。寫退讓段的益處有很多，一是上文提及的最實(shí)踐的用處---湊字?jǐn)?shù)，二是從行文邏輯看，寫一段退讓段也能夠展示考生思想的緊密性。只需時(shí)間允許，此種一舉多得的做法為何不嘗試呢?
托福獨(dú)立寫作退讓段寫法解說
但是，退讓段寫作也需求遵照一定的準(zhǔn)繩?？忌趯懽鲿r(shí)，應(yīng)當(dāng)依照三部曲停止：1)寫出一個(gè)反方觀念 2)停止一定水平的削弱 3)重申本人的觀念。
1. 寫出反方觀念
這一步大多數(shù)同窗都做得不錯(cuò)，但是在提出反方觀念之前，可再加上一些銜接詞，例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。還拿之前拿到標(biāo)題做例子，F(xiàn)or further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 總觀念是同意，退讓段寫學(xué)習(xí)好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方觀念時(shí)，應(yīng)寫：Admittedly, acquiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for "study" is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.
2. 停止一定水平的削弱
這是大多數(shù)同窗會(huì)疏忽的一步。很多同窗在寫退讓段的時(shí)分，喜歡跳過第二步，直接重申本人的觀念，但是這樣的寫法會(huì)顯得邏輯上牽強(qiáng)，行文也顯得僵硬。因而，在提出反方觀念時(shí)要停止一定的削弱。例如在寫完上文那句話之后，應(yīng)加上：However, the outstanding scores only prove the intelligence of the student, while the EQ, largely reflected by how well you relate with others, plays an utmost significant role in the future career success.
3. 重申本人的觀念
這一步十分重要，由于退讓段的提出僅僅是小插曲，重要的還是本人的觀念。切不可寫了退讓段，就忘了本人的立場(chǎng)，那樣就是得失相當(dāng)了。因而，在寫完上面兩句話之后，需求再加上一句，therefore, I still hold the opinion that relate well with others is more important than acquiring high scores in school.
在退讓段的寫作當(dāng)中，特別需求留意兩點(diǎn)：1是第二步的削弱過程，這樣可使文章看起來不那么唐突，更為流利。2是另外還需留意字?jǐn)?shù)的控制，退讓段切不可寫得超越之前的闡述段的長(zhǎng)度，否則就有觀念不明白的嫌疑了。
如何在小托福寫作考試中得滿分?我考過4次托福(純粹 愛好，第一次分就夠了) 作文 都是滿分，SAT作文也是滿分12分。下面給大家 說說 經(jīng)驗(yàn) !
如何在小托福寫作考試中得滿分
說在前面：因?yàn)槲以~匯、語(yǔ)法、句法實(shí)在是不行，所以走的寫作路線是純平民路線，沒有任何SAT詞匯，句法貌似只有定語(yǔ)從句，所以很簡(jiǎn)單……英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)和我一樣低等的人也很好上手。
我不是英語(yǔ)高手，我只是作文帝。
首先要搞明白的是，考試中的Essay永遠(yuǎn)不是抒情文、 記敘文 或者文學(xué)作品，而是 議論文，是表現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生邏輯思考、思想深度以及行文結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)方式的載體，所以記住的是“重要的不是你的句法、詞匯，而是你的思想、結(jié)構(gòu)?！?/p>
幾個(gè)注意點(diǎn)
1.不要用長(zhǎng)句
三立在線作文最牛逼的北京的史愚老師親口教導(dǎo)我的，長(zhǎng)句有兩個(gè)問題，一是中國(guó)學(xué)生水平不夠，很難寫出語(yǔ)法沒有錯(cuò)誤、意思表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確的長(zhǎng)句，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤、幾個(gè)逗號(hào)連用、倒裝從句混合是經(jīng)常的。二是看essay的人也是人，經(jīng)常是那種大學(xué)生研究生，沒人愿意看長(zhǎng)句混在一起的 文章，短劇更討人喜歡，并且表達(dá)意思更加清晰，準(zhǔn)確。
2.細(xì)節(jié)要注意
出現(xiàn)My brother, friend的時(shí)候加上名字，出現(xiàn)university的時(shí)候要給上名字，給出事例的時(shí)候要給出時(shí)間地點(diǎn)人物，沒人愿意看“我的弟弟去了一個(gè)大學(xué)，然后再大學(xué)里交了很多朋友，后來去了公司里那些朋友成為了他的財(cái)富”，而“我的弟弟Dan去了Upenn讀書，在學(xué)校里認(rèn)識(shí)了Jeff、Dennis等好朋友，而他后來去Google公司工作的時(shí)候發(fā)現(xiàn)了他們成為了自己一生寶貴的財(cái)富”比上面那句好了很多。實(shí)在要寫流水賬也要寫出細(xì)節(jié)和感覺。
3.瞎編要編的像
不解釋
4.自己的事例難寫，最好不要寫
5.積累，積累，再積累
沒有積累和自己獨(dú)立的想法
下面就是926考的一題托福題，實(shí)在是想不出來考試時(shí)寫的每句話，大概簡(jiǎn)短的還原一下當(dāng)時(shí)寫的東西，希望有所幫助
It is more important for government to pay attention to health care issues than environmental issues, do you agree or not?
(題目，環(huán)境保護(hù)和醫(yī)療改革哪個(gè)更重要)
"Water and air are the sources of people's lives, and the bases of the world." This was said by the ancient greek philosopher Thales.(開頭引用是最簡(jiǎn)單的，泰勒斯相信水和空氣是最重要的元素，相似的話說過，稍加改動(dòng)就可以出一個(gè)quote)(謝謝45樓的朋友糾正，是Thales說的，不是Hume)Looking at the dirty air in the sky, smelling the gross smell from Yantze River, I can't agree with him any more.(這就是搞笑的= =) The environmental issues are always the most important to a country, especially the country I live in, China.(可以適當(dāng)點(diǎn)出我提出這個(gè)論點(diǎn)的原因，畢竟不存在完全客觀的文章，主觀因素客觀環(huán)境都要適當(dāng)強(qiáng)調(diào))
When the environment is becoming worse and worse, I have to say it is the most serious problem in this country. My junior high classmate , Anita, lived by the end of the Yangtze River. The industrial area is around there and all the factories pollute the water day by day. Unfortunately she got cancer, like many people who lived there.(真人真事，默哀一分鐘) If the polluted environment wants to "kill" you, there is no doctor in this world can save us. Looking at her face in the funeral, I finally understood the importance of protecting environment.(真人真事要寫出細(xì)節(jié)和感覺，否則很難不像流水賬)
It is always early to improve the health care, but never the environment. My dad is the president of the city hospital, and he always tells me "If the government gives us enough money, this hospital can be the best one in this country very quick by hiring best doctors and buying newest equipment."(真人語(yǔ)言描寫，用他人的口說你想說的話) But we all know that the environment is always harder to save. After second industrial revolution in Britain, thepollution in Thames River became horrible. When the British government realized that problem, it took them tens of years to solve it.(用實(shí)例證明) Just like my mom always told me, " It's easy to make something dirty, really hard to make it clean again."
It's kind of like the paradox, but many times, the environmental problems cause many health care issues.(一般考試都是二選一，有時(shí)候你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你選的那個(gè)其實(shí)可以導(dǎo)致或_沒選的那個(gè)，也就是說這點(diǎn)要是點(diǎn)出來的話，就更證明你的論點(diǎn)的正確性了) Many datas do prove that, the people who live in a good environment have better quailities of lives. In 1970s, LBJ, the president of United States, passed a proposal which was called Clean Water Plan.(真事，積累) It was made to make the water clean in the US, and it did work. The most amazing thing is that the datas show the numbers of patients in hospital decreased rapidly during first 15 years.(瞎編，有一定的事實(shí)根據(jù)) That does prove my point, the environmental issue is a important factor of the health care issues.
As I said, we do realize the seriousness and importance of the environmental issues. We do need a "Heaven" with clean water and air, green trees and beautiful mountains. The "Hell" with doctors and hospitals is always our last choice.(結(jié)尾很重要，搞笑、正經(jīng)、引用都可以)
就這樣，希望大家都成為作文帝。
托福考試作文 范文 :技術(shù)創(chuàng)新改變世界
托?？荚囎魑念}目：
Directions:
The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question:
Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
托?？荚囎魑膮⒖挤治觯?/p>
要求考生通過定位，概括和分類仔細(xì)審題，就某個(gè)問題寫一篇感想，或就一個(gè)事件進(jìn)行闡述，解釋以及論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，列出提綱明確主題并圍繞主題來寫作和修改文章。
托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖?/p>
Although internet came into being about 2 decades ago, it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200 years. Its influence on business, communication and information is so profound that people now simply can't live without it.
based on the development of internet, a lot of new types of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established. The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google. Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service. This changed the traditional way of doing business which always involved some concrete products sell to people. Internet opens a cyber world in which a huge market is untapped. Besides large companies, internet also prospers small businesses. For example, local stores can do their business online. All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want. Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered. This way, we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping.
Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate. There are a lot of chatting programs, such as MSN, YAHOO MESSENGER, SKYPE, that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as everyone has access to internet. They even provide audio and video services meaning not only people can chat, but also they can hear and see each other. Besides that, what really makes them appealing is that they don't charge us for doing these things. These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us.
Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information. A search has shown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total. I certainly wouldn't doubt that. I use internet to search for a lot of information. Whenever I have an project to finish, the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials.
There is no doubt that internet has had a fundamental change on our everyday life. Though there are many problems that accompany with it, we can't deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history.
托?？荚囎魑姆段?父母應(yīng)代替少年 兒童 作決定嗎
托?？荚囎魑念}目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
托?？荚囎魑膮⒖挤治觯?/p>
表明立場(chǎng)：這樣的做法有一定的道理。支持這樣的做法的理由：older teenage children還不夠成熟(immature)，考慮不夠周全(inconsiderate)，尤其涉及到經(jīng)濟(jì)相關(guān)的決定時(shí)，缺乏獨(dú)立承擔(dān)能力(incapable of being independent)。然而，“如何保證parents或者adult relatives所作的決定就是正確的”也是個(gè)問題。另外，總是把孩子排除在決定權(quán)之外，是否會(huì)使孩子變得“沒能力做出任何決定”?the ability to make sound decision是人生道路上很重要的能力之一。
托福考試作文范文參考：
The issue of whether parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their teenage children arouses much controversy among people with different perspectives and backgrounds. Some people believe the statement is legitimate, because children are not mature and have not enough experiences to determine the optimal choice. On the other hand, people claim that nobody can control other's life even their parents. People should be responsible for their own behaviors and determine their lives. As far as I am concerned, I would like to refute the former and support the latter. In the following discussing, I would like to address some evidence to substantiate my point of view.
In the first place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that old teenagers have their own thoughts and ideas. The fact that the thoughts of children are not perfect and logical does not mean their parents have right to eliminate their decision without considering the children's intentions. In the era of rapid social and technological changes leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, the good decision in parents' time would be out of data.
In the second place, the job of parents is not to make decision for their children, but to help them to choose. In this period of 15 to 18 year-old children, they are always radical. If their parents make decisions instead of themselves, they will not obey these decisions. Parents had better told their kids about their opinions, worries and experiences as friends. Give much more room for their kids to think and decide. Respect and believe their kids will choose the better one and will face the result directly.
In sum, considering the aforementioned reasons I support the statement that older teenagers had better make decisions by themselves. Admittedly, our parents are our best and most early teacher. They would give us more important advices to help us choose the best decision.
托?？荚囎魑姆段?
托?？荚囎魑念}目：
Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? Do you agree or disagree? ( 2016年3月13日)
高中生應(yīng)該在上大學(xué)之前至少工作或者旅行一年，是否認(rèn)同?
思路拓展：
【間隔年之利好】
① 兼職工作可以幫助年輕人積累工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，獲得自我成就感，使他們對(duì)于社會(huì)有了更加深刻的洞察，為未來的擇業(yè)打下堅(jiān)實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。
② 旅行可以開拓視野、豐富知識(shí)、結(jié)交新友，鍛煉獨(dú)立性，這些對(duì)于未來的發(fā)展是有利好的。
③ 工作和旅行提高了人的社會(huì)意識(shí)，豐富了人生的閱歷，成熟了人的心態(tài)。
【間隔年之弊端】
① 很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回歸校園，如果這樣，間隔年就失去了它的初衷。
② 青春期是人的求知欲望最強(qiáng)，也是學(xué)習(xí)能力和 記憶力 最強(qiáng)的寶貴時(shí)期，高中生不應(yīng)該耽誤一年的時(shí)間遠(yuǎn)離校園而去打工或是閑逛，否則，學(xué)業(yè)就會(huì)被耽誤。
③ 高中生沒有形成核心競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力，很難找到工作。即使是找到，也很容易被欺騙和剝削。
托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖迹焊咧猩欠駪?yīng)該經(jīng)歷間隔年
【首段】背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)
Such is human nature to explore the unknown and see the outside word，that is why a great many high school graduates are keen on traveling or working for a period of time before attending dream universities. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is a wise idea to inspire high school leavers to experience the Grand Tour. As I see it, the merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits.
【二段】 間隔年之利好
The most important educational benefit of taking a year off before starting university life is that traveling exposes young adults to stunning places and exotic cultures. It is one thing for teenagers to read about distant countries, but it is even better to enrich the experience of the world on one’s own. What one learns by associating with strangers and absorbing diverse cultures is something he or she could never acquire in the classrooms. For example，I made many congenial friends by self-travel to Tibet after finishing my schooling. This fantastic journey not only expanded my mind but also alleviated my stress triggered by tight academic study. Feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit.
【三段】間隔年之利好
Virtually, youngsters can also become the beneficiaries of working as part-timers too. By that I mean, earning a living has a key role to play in helping one accumulate relevant working experience, train one’s crisis-solving abilities and deepen one’s insight into the society, which will lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder. To illustrate, via embarking on part-time jobs, I knew that money doesn’t grow on trees. Then, I studied even harder when coming back to campus.
托福寫作有幾篇 文章 ?關(guān)于托福寫作考試內(nèi)容想必是很多考生想要知道的。以下就是托福寫作考什么|考試內(nèi)容具體介紹，希望對(duì)考生托福備考有所幫助。
托福寫作考什么|考試內(nèi)容具體介紹
托福寫作包括兩部分，需在50分鐘的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成。
第一部分是綜合寫作，以閱讀和聽力材料為基礎(chǔ)的寫作試題，寫作時(shí)間為20分鐘?？忌紫刃枰喿x一篇學(xué)術(shù)篇章，閱讀的時(shí)間是3分鐘。然后文章隱去，考生需要聽一段大約為2分鐘左右的與閱讀主題相關(guān)的演講。之后考生需要針對(duì)閱讀和演講中的觀點(diǎn) 作文，總結(jié) 并說明演講的內(nèi)容與閱讀中觀點(diǎn)的關(guān)系，在20分鐘的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成一篇150~225字的文章。
第二部分是獨(dú)立寫作，需要考生根據(jù)自己的知識(shí)和 經(jīng)驗(yàn) 陳述、解釋并支持對(duì)待某一問題的某個(gè)看法，考查綜合語(yǔ)言技能的作文題目的評(píng)分以回答的質(zhì)量、完整性和準(zhǔn)確性為依據(jù)。在30分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇300字以上的文章。
如何寫好托福寫作的并列句
最常見的并列句就是用and，but等作為連接詞，將兩個(gè)分句連接起來。比如：
歷史必然含混也因此必然有趣。
History has to be vague and is therefore very interesting.
在中國(guó)孩子們沒有權(quán)利也因此做一些自己不喜歡做的事情。
In China children have little rights and therefore have to do many things that they do not enjoy doing.
計(jì)算機(jī)不僅給人們帶來了方便，還使人們學(xué)得更多。
Computers have not only brought convenience but they have also made people learn more.
從這些例句，我們可以得到以下這些結(jié)論：
1、盡量使用復(fù)數(shù)名詞作主語(yǔ)
之所以提出這樣的建議，是因?yàn)閺?fù)數(shù)名詞更能說明某個(gè)群體的共性，具有說服力，個(gè)體例子可能比較典型，不足以論證你的觀點(diǎn)。
2、能用過去式就用過去式，能用完成式就用完成式
3、用not only把第一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞切開，用but also把第二個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞切開
常見的三種 句子 切分結(jié)構(gòu)：
主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)切開(要求主語(yǔ)超過一個(gè)詞)
Those parents, however, have supported such a stupid decision.
助動(dòng)詞和實(shí)義動(dòng)詞切開
Those parents have , however, supported such a stupid decision.
系動(dòng)詞和表語(yǔ)切開
It is, however, hardly true that……
4、不是省略而是替換(代詞) 例：6. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
A nice environment will make people happier.
A nice environment will also make people healthier. A good environment will not only make people happier and healthier, but it will even make people more productive.
通過這三句的比較，我們可以很明顯地感受到并列句對(duì)于托福寫作level提高的作用。
托福寫作：如何構(gòu)建嚴(yán)密的邏輯框架
熟讀過一些典型托福 范文 的同學(xué)，應(yīng)該了解，托福寫作很講究文章的邏輯嚴(yán)密性。有的人甚至覺得他的結(jié)構(gòu)與八股文相比有過之而無不及，但是我建議大家不要輕視了這作文結(jié)構(gòu)。建議大家考查自己是否有能力用 邏輯思維 方法 來表達(dá)自己對(duì)事物的想法和看法，實(shí)際上也就是流暢表達(dá)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)上。大家在練習(xí)作文時(shí)，往往會(huì)覺得如何準(zhǔn)確用詞是練習(xí)的重點(diǎn)，會(huì)費(fèi)去大量的時(shí)間。其實(shí)，如何構(gòu)建一個(gè)嚴(yán)密的邏輯框架才是訓(xùn)練之重，需要被放在首位。
有了清晰的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，就像全文有了骨架，剩下的工作就是怎樣為他充實(shí)，這也就是在托福寫作過程中語(yǔ)言的多樣性。
這就要求大家一方面要繼續(xù)看范文，除了初期做的學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言和結(jié)構(gòu)之外，還可以把自己寫的文章和同一題目或相近題目的范文進(jìn)行比較，體會(huì)不同的思路。另一方面，更要把指導(dǎo)性參考書多看看。
另外在托?？紙?chǎng)上時(shí)間無疑是最為寶貴的，那么怎么能在有限的時(shí)間內(nèi)爭(zhēng)分奪秒，迅速閱讀并理解題目，理清思路，并組織好語(yǔ)言呢?這需要我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)不斷大量的練習(xí)，以及在每次練習(xí)后總結(jié)經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)，以免下次再犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。那么在平時(shí)的練習(xí)以及在考場(chǎng)上，審題無疑是最為重要的環(huán)節(jié)之一，因?yàn)樗苯优c我們的寫作內(nèi)容相聯(lián)系，如果我們審題出現(xiàn)了偏差，那么不管我們的語(yǔ)言多么優(yōu)美生動(dòng)，不管我們的結(jié)構(gòu)多么合理分明，我們的作文都是不合格的，所以我們?cè)诰毩?xí)及考試時(shí)，都不能不重視審題那一步驟，務(wù)必要在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi)抓住題目的關(guān)鍵詞，正確理解要求，保證迅速而準(zhǔn)確的解讀出題目的隱含意義，并迅速梳理出自己的思路，樹立自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫出高質(zhì)的作文來。
大家知道新托福需要機(jī)考，所以在做模考的時(shí)候，要熟悉電腦的操作加快打字的速度，為自己贏取時(shí)間。
新東方托福寫作語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：孩子做作業(yè)時(shí)是否可以聽歌上網(wǎng)
Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework 在做作業(yè)的時(shí)候，孩子們可以使用手機(jī)或者是聽音樂：
作家立場(chǎng)：反駁孩子們可以一邊學(xué)習(xí)一邊聽歌或者使用手機(jī)。
【思路拓展】
1. 對(duì)于缺乏自律性的學(xué)生而言，一心二用容易分散他們的注意力，降低他們的學(xué)習(xí)效率。形成對(duì)比的是，學(xué)生們?nèi)绻麑Ｗ⒂趯W(xué)習(xí)，可以培養(yǎng)他們的學(xué)習(xí)興趣，提高他們學(xué)習(xí)效率，使學(xué)生們精通學(xué)業(yè)。
2. 學(xué)業(yè)成功的關(guān)鍵是專注專心，做作業(yè)的同時(shí)聽歌或者上網(wǎng)容易使孩子們變得懶散，散漫的習(xí)慣對(duì)于孩子們的學(xué)業(yè)，事業(yè)，生活都會(huì)造成不良影響。
讓步學(xué)生做作業(yè)聽歌和上網(wǎng)的利好：
1. 放松身心，緩解壓力，尤其是在遇到學(xué)習(xí)困難的時(shí)候。
【薛鵬原創(chuàng)語(yǔ)料庫(kù)】
1. The study will be delayed and disadvantaged.耽誤學(xué)業(yè)
解析：disadvantage v使處于不利地位
2. get unsatisfying marks in the exam v考試成績(jī)不能令人們滿足
3. by contrast = in marked contrast v形成對(duì)比的是
4. Students need to be focused when fulfilling homework duty 學(xué)生在完成作業(yè)時(shí)應(yīng)該專注的。
5. zero in on one’s academic study v專注于學(xué)習(xí)
解析：zero in on = focus on = concentrate on v專注于……
6. One’s attention will distracted 一個(gè)人的精力會(huì)被分散
7. impose much pressure upon our minds v增加了精神的壓力
拓展：impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了國(guó)家的經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力
8. …… is a great-waster v …… 是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的事情
9. …… waste large amounts of time v ……浪費(fèi)大量的時(shí)間
10. fail to improve the efficiency of learning v不能提高學(xué)習(xí)效率
11. cannot enhance the efficiency of learning v不能提高學(xué)習(xí)效率
12. might become absent-minded 也許會(huì)變得心不在焉的
13. …… might interfere with one’s study …… 也許會(huì)耽誤一個(gè)人的學(xué)習(xí)
解析：interfere with v干涉……
14. do the homework duty v做家庭作業(yè)
15. fulfill the homework duty v完成家庭作業(yè)
16. You can not eat your cake and have it two 魚和熊掌不可兼得。
17. My personal story could justify my stand 我的個(gè)人的 故事 可以證明我的立場(chǎng)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：用于例證拓展的引導(dǎo)語(yǔ)，我的例子更加有說服力。
18. Some people argue that they might lose enthusiasm for their studies if they concentrate on study for a long time, therefore, they prefer to finish their homework duty while surfing on line or listen to some favorite music. 有些人認(rèn)為他們?nèi)绻麑Ｗ⒂趯W(xué)習(xí)太久，也許會(huì)失去學(xué)習(xí)的熱情，因此，他們更加喜歡一邊上網(wǎng)或者聽過，一邊完成作業(yè)。
19. it is unwise to do sth v做……是不明智的
20. it is a hasty decision to encourage sb to do sth v鼓勵(lì)某人做……是草率的決定
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