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想在托?？荚囍腥〉脻M分要怎么做
作文都是沒有明文規(guī)定的滿分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，只要你得到考官的青睞，內(nèi)容符合主題就有可能得滿分哦。那么滿分作文又有什么訣竅?
1、避免中式英語：第一個(gè)最為顯著的問題就是如何避免中式英語，其實(shí)我們想說出什么是中式英語，有些難，但是我們可以很明確的知道，托福閱讀的文章都是非常地道的英語，因此，我們在看托福閱讀的時(shí)候，一定總是在思考我們自己會怎么寫，這是一個(gè)非常重要的過程。
2、用詞準(zhǔn)確：比如說affect與shock有什么區(qū)別?affect只是影響，但是沒有幅度上的差別。shock相應(yīng)的就是很劇烈的影響的含義，這就是用詞的準(zhǔn)確性。再比如and與so有什么差別?
3、動詞的名詞化：這其實(shí)是寫出地道托福作文的一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的小妙招，就是將動詞名詞化，因此在這里也將其單獨(dú)列出。比如說 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterranean’s waters?這句話，我們寫的時(shí)候是不是會將其寫成Why did the Mediterranean’s waters evaporate?
4 、習(xí)語的使用：習(xí)語在托福寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)當(dāng)中是一部分，往往是一個(gè)地道的寫作者與一個(gè)中等的寫作者之間的很大的差別，雖然有些人在強(qiáng)調(diào)幽默在文章當(dāng)中十分的重要，但是現(xiàn)實(shí)情況是，很多人都無法控制自己的文章之中的幽默夠準(zhǔn)確，因此也就很難去使用幽默了。
5 、句式多樣化：這其實(shí)是我們我們在25分之前沒有意識到的問題，我們在此之前總是在努力的將自己的托福作文加入很多的長句，同時(shí)也希望將自己的寫作多寫幾十字，但是其實(shí)這些東西都是非常無益的。優(yōu)秀的寫作一個(gè)很重要的特征就是讓人有很強(qiáng)的可讀性，也就是讓人讀下去。
我推薦：
托福閱讀滿分為30分，學(xué)生如果能夠在閱讀部分考到25分以上，已經(jīng)是很不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)了。那么學(xué)生該如何才能拿到25分以上的成績？與來看看托福閱讀的高分經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
一、托福閱讀提分
1.平時(shí)練習(xí)怎么做？
錯(cuò)誤做法：“文章看一下，題目做一下，然后對一下答案，看著答案思考一下，說服自己答案是對的，自己選錯(cuò)了，就過了”
正確做法：錯(cuò)題分析一定要寫出來，而且錯(cuò)題總結(jié)一定要等兩天，忘掉答案的時(shí)候再做才有效果。做完題，要問自己——文章能復(fù)述出來嗎？下次再給你做這些題目能保證全對嗎？如果答案是否定的，那就是在做無用功；后面就不要做新題了，先把老題做透吧。
2. 如何備考詞匯題？
詞匯題是閱讀高分的第一道關(guān)卡，總共30道題里至少有4-5道左右的詞匯題。詞匯題所占分值高，重復(fù)率非常高比較容易拿分，考到的詞又都是對句子理解至關(guān)重要的詞，所以這部分一定要重視。這些題目里面，同學(xué)們一般對一半左右的題有把握，其他的只能靠上下文或者構(gòu)詞法猜測。但事實(shí)上，詞匯題考查的詞匯都是較高頻的學(xué)術(shù)詞匯，如果這些詞都沒背熟練，那上下文估計(jì)也是看不懂的。況且，托福的詞匯題就是考察vocabulary，能夠說得通的詞不一定對，因?yàn)橐茨芊裉鎿Q原詞。
3.先看文章還是先看題？
這個(gè)問題其實(shí)因人而異——如果你看文章的時(shí)候看完就忘記，啥都記不得，那建議你先讀題再去讀文章，這樣可以有針對性地尋找信息。如果你是讀完題就被題目帶走，或者經(jīng)常找錯(cuò)考點(diǎn)句的話，那還是老老實(shí)實(shí)先把段落讀完。
很多同學(xué)會在做題之前很快讀一下每段首句。這很好，但不能只讀首句，因?yàn)橛袝r(shí)段首句并非主旨句，而是transitional sentence（過渡句），那這時(shí)候尾句的總結(jié)就一定要看，這樣才能對全段有更好的把握。
閱讀課上我們都會強(qiáng)調(diào)讓學(xué)生先讀文章。因?yàn)殚喿x考試的終極目標(biāo)就是上大學(xué)之后，學(xué)生有閱讀參考書和論文的能力。很多同學(xué)擔(dān)心時(shí)間不夠，那至少也要讀首尾句，對文章的整體框架有所把握，因?yàn)殚喿x考試的趨勢就是越考越綜合。
二、提高閱讀速度
1、縮短審題時(shí)間
解決每一道題都包含著審題和解題兩個(gè)步驟，快速清楚分析問題是高效解題的關(guān)鍵。你可能覺得這部分時(shí)間沒法省，但事實(shí)上托福閱讀當(dāng)中有幾類題型其實(shí)已經(jīng)不需要看題干啦。
比如說詞匯題、句子簡化題，句子插入題和全文總結(jié)題。詞匯題會在原文中標(biāo)注出考查的單詞或詞組，我們考試時(shí)無需花太多時(shí)間讀題，只要知道考查的是什么詞，直接回原文閱讀或直接對比選項(xiàng)。句子簡化題，插入題和全文總結(jié)題的題干很長，但固定，也就是說這一題型的題干每次都一樣。如果每次花時(shí)間閱讀，費(fèi)事又不一定理解正確。所以一定在考前學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)先仔細(xì)閱讀分析句子簡化題的題干，理解出題原則和解題要求，牢記于心，考試的時(shí)候就無需再花時(shí)間閱讀題干，直接分析考查的句子。
對于細(xì)節(jié)題，推斷題和修辭目的題，審題就非常關(guān)鍵，如果審題不清晰，直接看選項(xiàng)對比原文，很容易會答非所問。一方面詞匯是基礎(chǔ)，掌握了一定量的詞匯才能無障礙理解題目，另外要注重題目問的是什么，是what，why，where還是which。與此同時(shí)要特別注意題目中的邏輯關(guān)系，這不僅幫助我們定位而且?guī)椭覀兏逦斫忸}目。
2、邊讀邊記
托福閱讀文章長但其實(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)還是明顯的，為了提升答題時(shí)間，我們需要在閱讀的同時(shí)記錄下細(xì)節(jié)和一些需要理解的內(nèi)容?？梢幻嬉x一面又要記好像有點(diǎn)兒困難，還好有發(fā)草稿紙……可我們該記錄什么呢？
主題段和主題句的關(guān)鍵詞
人名、地名和專有名詞的位置
舉例主體（此處可以在閱讀中忽略例子中的具體信息，只記錄例子是什么即可）
文中提出的新概念和局部核心概念
重要的邏輯關(guān)系
如何在小托福寫作考試中得滿分?我考過4次托福(純粹 愛好，第一次分就夠了) 作文 都是滿分，SAT作文也是滿分12分。下面給大家 說說 經(jīng)驗(yàn) !
如何在小托福寫作考試中得滿分
說在前面：因?yàn)槲以~匯、語法、句法實(shí)在是不行，所以走的寫作路線是純平民路線，沒有任何SAT詞匯，句法貌似只有定語從句，所以很簡單……英語基礎(chǔ)和我一樣低等的人也很好上手。
我不是英語高手，我只是作文帝。
首先要搞明白的是，考試中的Essay永遠(yuǎn)不是抒情文、 記敘文 或者文學(xué)作品，而是 議論文，是表現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生邏輯思考、思想深度以及行文結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)方式的載體，所以記住的是“重要的不是你的句法、詞匯，而是你的思想、結(jié)構(gòu)?！?/p>
幾個(gè)注意點(diǎn)
1.不要用長句
三立在線作文最牛逼的北京的史愚老師親口教導(dǎo)我的，長句有兩個(gè)問題，一是中國學(xué)生水平不夠，很難寫出語法沒有錯(cuò)誤、意思表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確的長句，語法錯(cuò)誤、幾個(gè)逗號連用、倒裝從句混合是經(jīng)常的。二是看essay的人也是人，經(jīng)常是那種大學(xué)生研究生，沒人愿意看長句混在一起的 文章，短劇更討人喜歡，并且表達(dá)意思更加清晰，準(zhǔn)確。
2.細(xì)節(jié)要注意
出現(xiàn)My brother, friend的時(shí)候加上名字，出現(xiàn)university的時(shí)候要給上名字，給出事例的時(shí)候要給出時(shí)間地點(diǎn)人物，沒人愿意看“我的弟弟去了一個(gè)大學(xué)，然后再大學(xué)里交了很多朋友，后來去了公司里那些朋友成為了他的財(cái)富”，而“我的弟弟Dan去了Upenn讀書，在學(xué)校里認(rèn)識了Jeff、Dennis等好朋友，而他后來去Google公司工作的時(shí)候發(fā)現(xiàn)了他們成為了自己一生寶貴的財(cái)富”比上面那句好了很多。實(shí)在要寫流水賬也要寫出細(xì)節(jié)和感覺。
3.瞎編要編的像
不解釋
4.自己的事例難寫，最好不要寫
5.積累，積累，再積累
沒有積累和自己獨(dú)立的想法
下面就是926考的一題托福題，實(shí)在是想不出來考試時(shí)寫的每句話，大概簡短的還原一下當(dāng)時(shí)寫的東西，希望有所幫助
It is more important for government to pay attention to health care issues than environmental issues, do you agree or not?
(題目，環(huán)境保護(hù)和醫(yī)療改革哪個(gè)更重要)
"Water and air are the sources of people's lives, and the bases of the world." This was said by the ancient greek philosopher Thales.(開頭引用是最簡單的，泰勒斯相信水和空氣是最重要的元素，相似的話說過，稍加改動就可以出一個(gè)quote)(謝謝45樓的朋友糾正，是Thales說的，不是Hume)Looking at the dirty air in the sky, smelling the gross smell from Yantze River, I can't agree with him any more.(這就是搞笑的= =) The environmental issues are always the most important to a country, especially the country I live in, China.(可以適當(dāng)點(diǎn)出我提出這個(gè)論點(diǎn)的原因，畢竟不存在完全客觀的文章，主觀因素客觀環(huán)境都要適當(dāng)強(qiáng)調(diào))
When the environment is becoming worse and worse, I have to say it is the most serious problem in this country. My junior high classmate , Anita, lived by the end of the Yangtze River. The industrial area is around there and all the factories pollute the water day by day. Unfortunately she got cancer, like many people who lived there.(真人真事，默哀一分鐘) If the polluted environment wants to "kill" you, there is no doctor in this world can save us. Looking at her face in the funeral, I finally understood the importance of protecting environment.(真人真事要寫出細(xì)節(jié)和感覺，否則很難不像流水賬)
It is always early to improve the health care, but never the environment. My dad is the president of the city hospital, and he always tells me "If the government gives us enough money, this hospital can be the best one in this country very quick by hiring best doctors and buying newest equipment."(真人語言描寫，用他人的口說你想說的話) But we all know that the environment is always harder to save. After second industrial revolution in Britain, thepollution in Thames River became horrible. When the British government realized that problem, it took them tens of years to solve it.(用實(shí)例證明) Just like my mom always told me, " It's easy to make something dirty, really hard to make it clean again."
It's kind of like the paradox, but many times, the environmental problems cause many health care issues.(一般考試都是二選一，有時(shí)候你會發(fā)現(xiàn)你選的那個(gè)其實(shí)可以導(dǎo)致或_沒選的那個(gè)，也就是說這點(diǎn)要是點(diǎn)出來的話，就更證明你的論點(diǎn)的正確性了) Many datas do prove that, the people who live in a good environment have better quailities of lives. In 1970s, LBJ, the president of United States, passed a proposal which was called Clean Water Plan.(真事，積累) It was made to make the water clean in the US, and it did work. The most amazing thing is that the datas show the numbers of patients in hospital decreased rapidly during first 15 years.(瞎編，有一定的事實(shí)根據(jù)) That does prove my point, the environmental issue is a important factor of the health care issues.
As I said, we do realize the seriousness and importance of the environmental issues. We do need a "Heaven" with clean water and air, green trees and beautiful mountains. The "Hell" with doctors and hospitals is always our last choice.(結(jié)尾很重要，搞笑、正經(jīng)、引用都可以)
就這樣，希望大家都成為作文帝。
托?？荚囎魑? 范文 :技術(shù)創(chuàng)新改變世界
托?？荚囎魑念}目：
Directions:
The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question:
Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
托福考試作文參考分析：
要求考生通過定位，概括和分類仔細(xì)審題，就某個(gè)問題寫一篇感想，或就一個(gè)事件進(jìn)行闡述，解釋以及論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，列出提綱明確主題并圍繞主題來寫作和修改文章。
托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖?/p>
Although internet came into being about 2 decades ago, it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200 years. Its influence on business, communication and information is so profound that people now simply can't live without it.
based on the development of internet, a lot of new types of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established. The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google. Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service. This changed the traditional way of doing business which always involved some concrete products sell to people. Internet opens a cyber world in which a huge market is untapped. Besides large companies, internet also prospers small businesses. For example, local stores can do their business online. All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want. Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered. This way, we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping.
Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate. There are a lot of chatting programs, such as MSN, YAHOO MESSENGER, SKYPE, that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as everyone has access to internet. They even provide audio and video services meaning not only people can chat, but also they can hear and see each other. Besides that, what really makes them appealing is that they don't charge us for doing these things. These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us.
Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information. A search has shown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total. I certainly wouldn't doubt that. I use internet to search for a lot of information. Whenever I have an project to finish, the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials.
There is no doubt that internet has had a fundamental change on our everyday life. Though there are many problems that accompany with it, we can't deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history.
托?？荚囎魑姆段?父母應(yīng)代替少年 兒童 作決定嗎
托?？荚囎魑念}目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
托?？荚囎魑膮⒖挤治觯?/p>
表明立場：這樣的做法有一定的道理。支持這樣的做法的理由：older teenage children還不夠成熟(immature)，考慮不夠周全(inconsiderate)，尤其涉及到經(jīng)濟(jì)相關(guān)的決定時(shí)，缺乏獨(dú)立承擔(dān)能力(incapable of being independent)。然而，“如何保證parents或者adult relatives所作的決定就是正確的”也是個(gè)問題。另外，總是把孩子排除在決定權(quán)之外，是否會使孩子變得“沒能力做出任何決定”?the ability to make sound decision是人生道路上很重要的能力之一。
托福考試作文范文參考：
The issue of whether parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their teenage children arouses much controversy among people with different perspectives and backgrounds. Some people believe the statement is legitimate, because children are not mature and have not enough experiences to determine the optimal choice. On the other hand, people claim that nobody can control other's life even their parents. People should be responsible for their own behaviors and determine their lives. As far as I am concerned, I would like to refute the former and support the latter. In the following discussing, I would like to address some evidence to substantiate my point of view.
In the first place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that old teenagers have their own thoughts and ideas. The fact that the thoughts of children are not perfect and logical does not mean their parents have right to eliminate their decision without considering the children's intentions. In the era of rapid social and technological changes leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, the good decision in parents' time would be out of data.
In the second place, the job of parents is not to make decision for their children, but to help them to choose. In this period of 15 to 18 year-old children, they are always radical. If their parents make decisions instead of themselves, they will not obey these decisions. Parents had better told their kids about their opinions, worries and experiences as friends. Give much more room for their kids to think and decide. Respect and believe their kids will choose the better one and will face the result directly.
In sum, considering the aforementioned reasons I support the statement that older teenagers had better make decisions by themselves. Admittedly, our parents are our best and most early teacher. They would give us more important advices to help us choose the best decision.
托?？荚囎魑姆段?
托?？荚囎魑念}目：
Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? Do you agree or disagree? ( 2016年3月13日)
高中生應(yīng)該在上大學(xué)之前至少工作或者旅行一年，是否認(rèn)同?
思路拓展：
【間隔年之利好】
① 兼職工作可以幫助年輕人積累工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，獲得自我成就感，使他們對于社會有了更加深刻的洞察，為未來的擇業(yè)打下堅(jiān)實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。
② 旅行可以開拓視野、豐富知識、結(jié)交新友，鍛煉獨(dú)立性，這些對于未來的發(fā)展是有利好的。
③ 工作和旅行提高了人的社會意識，豐富了人生的閱歷，成熟了人的心態(tài)。
【間隔年之弊端】
① 很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回歸校園，如果這樣，間隔年就失去了它的初衷。
② 青春期是人的求知欲望最強(qiáng)，也是學(xué)習(xí)能力和 記憶力 最強(qiáng)的寶貴時(shí)期，高中生不應(yīng)該耽誤一年的時(shí)間遠(yuǎn)離校園而去打工或是閑逛，否則，學(xué)業(yè)就會被耽誤。
③ 高中生沒有形成核心競爭力，很難找到工作。即使是找到，也很容易被欺騙和剝削。
托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖迹焊咧猩欠駪?yīng)該經(jīng)歷間隔年
【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場
Such is human nature to explore the unknown and see the outside word，that is why a great many high school graduates are keen on traveling or working for a period of time before attending dream universities. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is a wise idea to inspire high school leavers to experience the Grand Tour. As I see it, the merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits.
【二段】 間隔年之利好
The most important educational benefit of taking a year off before starting university life is that traveling exposes young adults to stunning places and exotic cultures. It is one thing for teenagers to read about distant countries, but it is even better to enrich the experience of the world on one’s own. What one learns by associating with strangers and absorbing diverse cultures is something he or she could never acquire in the classrooms. For example，I made many congenial friends by self-travel to Tibet after finishing my schooling. This fantastic journey not only expanded my mind but also alleviated my stress triggered by tight academic study. Feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit.
【三段】間隔年之利好
Virtually, youngsters can also become the beneficiaries of working as part-timers too. By that I mean, earning a living has a key role to play in helping one accumulate relevant working experience, train one’s crisis-solving abilities and deepen one’s insight into the society, which will lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder. To illustrate, via embarking on part-time jobs, I knew that money doesn’t grow on trees. Then, I studied even harder when coming back to campus.
一、做題的原則
1）在做題時(shí)，應(yīng)牢記以下幾點(diǎn)：
1.1）每篇文章的題目他是會根據(jù)整篇文章的順序，即使有個(gè)別題打亂文章順序，在題干里也會有提示，告訴考生這題是在文章的哪個(gè)部分。
1.2)做題時(shí)，根據(jù)題干或選項(xiàng)的關(guān)鍵詞再回到文章尋找關(guān)鍵詞的句子中。
1.3)當(dāng)有難句時(shí)，最直接有效的方式就是將句子進(jìn)行解析，把握整個(gè)句子在文中的意思，不要盯著個(gè)別生僻詞不放，不然就會讓你因小失大。
1.4)每個(gè)問題的四個(gè)選項(xiàng)多數(shù)是這樣的兩種情況：1.對文章中相關(guān)部分的正確釋度 2.歪曲原文、或者與原文沒有絲毫聯(lián)系。換句話說，命題的老師在出題時(shí)會玩一些文字陷阱，用各種表達(dá)形式讓考生沒有頭緒。
所以考生應(yīng)該明白自己的職責(zé)是找出真相，找到符合文章意思和題意的選項(xiàng)。
二、做題的步驟
1）第一步：花幾分鐘時(shí)間掃每篇文章開頭幾個(gè)句子，從而可以定位文章難易程度。一般來說，平均每篇閱讀文章需要花費(fèi)20分鐘左右的時(shí)間。如果遇到比較難的文章，考生按部就班一道道的做題就有可能因時(shí)間不夠而做錯(cuò)或者沒時(shí)間做好多道題。
因此首先確定文章的難易程度，有助于考生科學(xué)分配閱讀部分的做題時(shí)間。
2）第二步：采取“結(jié)構(gòu)掃描”法分配閱讀理解一篇文章。所謂結(jié)構(gòu)，即文章的骨架。閱讀文章是純學(xué)術(shù)文章，是北美學(xué)生在大學(xué)里天天都能接觸到的教科書風(fēng)格的文章，這些文章涉及天文地理，人文社科等各個(gè)方面。
正確的閱讀文章的方法首先要做的應(yīng)該是把文章首句先理解吃透，因?yàn)槲恼碌氖拙渫褪俏恼碌闹黝}。然后把首段的剩下的的句子盡快的略讀，文章其他段落也可以采取同樣的方法閱讀。
各段落其他的句子一般來說都是用來說明各個(gè)段落的主題中心句的，沒有必要每個(gè)句子都徹底看懂。所以，采取“結(jié)構(gòu)掃描”法，意味著考生可以以最快的方式了解文章大意，從而讓考生進(jìn)一步做題，而不至于出現(xiàn)大方向的理解錯(cuò)誤。
預(yù)祝大家考試順利，成績滿意。
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