托福寫作《祖父母與年輕人》

托福寫作《祖父母與年輕人》

托?？荚嚨膫淇?，作文是不能忽略的重點(diǎn)。尤其是托福作文經(jīng)常會(huì)與一些社會(huì)上的熱點(diǎn)話題聯(lián)系在一起。因此考生在備考時(shí)，可多練習(xí)一些熱點(diǎn)話題的托福寫作。下面為大家?guī)硪黄懻撟娓改概c年輕人的2017托福寫作范文，供大家參考。

　The advice from grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot during the past 50 years.

Throughout the gradual changes occurring to the whole human society, the value of advice from the older generation has become one of the most controversial issues among the general public. Many youngsters are the strong supporters of the claim that the huge changes in the past half century has made the suggestions from grandparents useless. As far as I am concerned, the advice from the senior is not worth following, which is particularly true of hunting for an ideal job and receiving education.

To begin with, consider the job-hunting. With the further specification of industries, an increasing amount of new careers and job position are created, some of which are out of the understanding of the old people. For example, because of the remarkable booming of internet companies, the professional video gamers, which are considered inferior by the senior, has become a job which enjoy great popularity among the young. As a result, the standard of judging whether a job is good or not has changed a lot so that the advice from grandparents about choosing a decent job is outdated. According to a survey conducted by a newspaper titiled China Daily among 1,000 people aged over 60 about the ideal job they consider, more than 95% of the surveyed vote for the so-called iron-bowl jobs such as teachers and civil servants, which has become obsolete to some extent. Therefore, the lack of knowledge about the modern job markets makes grandparents unable to provide feasible guidance for their grandchildren.

Furthermore, the same logic can apply to the issue of getting educated. For one thing, with the advances in technology, the ways of obtaining knowledge have become diverse and various, with the result that grandparents are not accustomed to these ways. For instance, it quite common to see that pupils learn English by watching English movies played on the computers. However, grandparents may ban such behaviors of their grandchildren by claiming that using computer can do nothing but waste their time and do harm to their vision. For another, the further specification of majors in college or universities make the knowledge imparted to students today quite different from that gained by grandparents 50 years ago.Consequently, their suggestions about the major-choosing of the young people may be misleading.

Taking what has been discussed above into account, I can draw the conclusion that the advice from grandparents is not useful any more for their grandchildren for the past 50 years has witnessed so many changes especially in education and employment.

　附：托福寫作點(diǎn)撥：結(jié)尾要體現(xiàn)思想的深度，paraphrase的功底以及適當(dāng)?shù)目隙ā?/p>

一坨屎應(yīng)該最恨第一段和最后一段幾乎一模一樣的作文了。你們看到這種作文會(huì)不會(huì)也很火大?所以寫出好結(jié)尾是最難也最能抓分的.。

[屁股]的意見：

1)思想深度不用講。如果有，把那句意味深長、富有哲理的話放到段落最后，引起人們無限的遐思。這個(gè)思路和中文寫作是一樣的。如果沒有名人名言，可以自己寫?；蜿愂龌蚍磫柣蛞??？偙热f年不變的“therefore, I think we should choose work in the office instead of at home.”要好得多。

2)據(jù)某大神說，結(jié)尾的段首承認(rèn)一下反方觀點(diǎn)存在一定的道理會(huì)有驚喜~大家考試可以試一試。體現(xiàn)我們“風(fēng)度”和“critical thinking”的大好時(shí)機(jī)。

3)paraphrase自己的觀點(diǎn)切勿原搬照抄段首!大忌阿!實(shí)在沒時(shí)間也只能是下下策，但是動(dòng)詞、語態(tài)你總要改一改吧，不然這樣的結(jié)尾也給高分，那是太便宜你了。最好的方法是把主題提高一個(gè)層次。比如說“我們需要堅(jiān)持聽課，不翹課”可以在段尾寫成，每天認(rèn)真聽課是學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步的不二法門這種。上升一個(gè)境界。不要過于死摳一坨屎給的arguement。

托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：探索外太空還是完善基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施

托福獨(dú)立寫作非常難寫，這是很多學(xué)生的真實(shí)寫照，托福欄目我整理了相關(guān)的資料，希望可以幫助考生度過考試的難關(guān)，下面是我搜集的托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：探索外太空還是完善基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的相關(guān)資訊，歡迎參考!

托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：探索外太空還是完善基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施

Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該花更多的錢探索外太空(比如到月球或其他星球旅行);另外一些人不同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該花更多的錢完善地球上的基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施。你同意哪個(gè)觀點(diǎn)?用具體的原因和細(xì)節(jié)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。

托福獨(dú)立寫作模板：英文例文

When we see photographs of starving children, it’s hard to say that we should spend billions of dollars on space exploration. But that’s just what we should do. Children don’t need to be starving, but we do need to explore space. Right now, we have enough money to feed every person on Earth. Children are starving because of mismanagement of resources and simple human greed. Those are problems we can solve right here on earth. That shouldn’t stop our need to find out what’s beyond our own solar system.

We may never make contact with whatever other species there may be out there in space. Even so, there are still two very practical and positive consequences of space exploration. One is a certainty and the other is a possibility. The certainty is medical research. Yes, we can conduct research here on earth. But much of the research done in space, for example, on the effects of gravity on bone marrow, is making a difference in medicine here on Earth. When we do research in space, we also learn more about space exploration. Also, many of the inventions that were developed for space travel have been adapted to good use on Earth.

The possible consequence of space exploration is finding another planet human beings can colonize. Overpopulation is a huge problem on our planet. People are living longer, more healthful lives, and that’s a good thing. But it means there are fewer people dying and more people being born. Eventually we’ll have less space, fewer resources, and major distribution problems. If we can find another planet to live on, we can relieve the problems of overpopulation on our planet.

It’s a tragedy that there are human beings suffering on Earth. However, if we wait until everyone has a perfect life, we will never explore space—and that , too, would be a kind of tragedy.

托福獨(dú)立寫作模板：范文詞匯

mismanagement：管理不善，經(jīng)營不當(dāng)，處置失當(dāng); 處置失當(dāng)

marrow：骨髓; 脊髓; 滋養(yǎng)品; 〈英〉食用葫蘆

colonize：開拓殖民地; 移居于殖民地

overpopulation：人口過剩; 生齒過剩

tragedy：悲劇，慘劇; 悲劇文學(xué); 悲劇理論，悲劇表演藝術(shù); 悲劇式作品

2017年12月17日托福寫作真題回憶

2017年12月17日的托?？荚嚵钊思?dòng)，你準(zhǔn)備的怎么樣呢?考試結(jié)果又如何呢?想必是不少出國人士比較關(guān)心的問題，和托福欄目一起來了解了解2017年12月17日托福寫作真題回憶，歡迎閱讀，更多后續(xù)內(nèi)容將第一時(shí)間更新。

2017年12月17日托福寫作真題回憶

先來回憶一下最近幾期的真題：

獨(dú)立寫作：

題目：

Agree or disagree: Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.

題目分析：

本文是關(guān)于教育類的舊題。考查的文章類型是古今對(duì)比類。是課上講過的教育類重點(diǎn)話題。

范文語料：

托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：

第一段:　 one of the greatest advances of society has been教育發(fā)展。盡管 education has become more important to society，老師社會(huì)地位沒有advance，現(xiàn)在人們沒有respect teacher as before.

論點(diǎn)拓展示范：Many years before, scholars 會(huì)被given credit for their contribution to society.例如 Socrates 和Confucius . 在過去，men of knowledge held 有特殊社會(huì)地位，并且被 honored. 反面論述現(xiàn)在并不是這樣的情況了。

論點(diǎn)拓展示范：可以借用9日關(guān)于教師品質(zhì)的文章，broaden the definition of what qualifies as a teacher. Previously，教師選拔基于were based on a strict guild system并且有a strict training system.背景化論述現(xiàn)在 Nowadays，很多 technology device導(dǎo)致上課以及教師沒有那么necessary，thus influencing the value of a teacher in society.

真題比對(duì)與預(yù)測：

接下來要關(guān)注科技類，品質(zhì)類文章，同時(shí)要將三選一類題目列入復(fù)習(xí)重點(diǎn)。

As the leader of a city, what would you do to ensure the prosperity and success of the city?

A. Creating job opportunities for the unemployed

B. Lowering food price

C. Providing affordable housing

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Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.

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Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. But now it’s considered as a good quality of a person. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

綜合寫作：

話題: causes of sea star's disease

閱讀部分：

1. parasites, 附著在海星身上的寄生蟲快速擴(kuò)散，導(dǎo)致海星死亡

2. bacteria海星以貝類為食，貝類上的細(xì)菌導(dǎo)致海星死亡;

3. rising water temperature水溫升高，導(dǎo)致海星的免疫力下降，從而死亡

聽力部分反駁：

1. 寄生蟲只會(huì)在海星繁殖期對(duì)海星有害，但是海星數(shù)量全年都在減少，所以海星的死亡不是寄生蟲導(dǎo)致的;

2. 海星可以抵御這種細(xì)菌，不會(huì)產(chǎn)生疾病;

3. 實(shí)際上海星死亡率較高的海域水溫都很恒定。

真題比對(duì)與預(yù)測：

今日考查話題依然屬于生物考古類，在下次考試中，同樣屬于熱門考點(diǎn)。可利用TPO24，TPO26，TPO29進(jìn)行練習(xí)。

同時(shí)注意歷史人文類，可利用TPO 12，16，25練習(xí)

2018年5月12日托福寫作真題解析

對(duì)于準(zhǔn)備最近考托福的同學(xué)來說，肯定想知道這次托福考試的難度怎么樣吧！今天就和來看看2018年5月12日托福寫作真題解析。

獨(dú)立寫作：

Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as they are available to the public，while other people prefer to wait. Which do you prefer？重復(fù)2014年的6月15日

這道題目開頭怎么開呢？給大家一個(gè)范文參考：

In the modern world，we are bedazzled by a plethora of choices when it comes to technological gadgets as high-tech companies roll out new phones，cameras and new everything every few months to prey on our predilection for novelty. While some have a penchant for the adrenaline rush of getting hands on the newest gizmos，others have the patience to wait until the craze has abated. In my opinion，there is no point in getting a high-tech product immediately ?after it hits the stores.

綜合寫作：

重復(fù)2014.03.01，及2014.9.21加場

theories in explaining why some plants fold theirleaves at night.

閱讀

1. Protection against coldness （decrease the surfaceexposed）

2. Protection against infection （easy to be infected bynight rainstorm because the spread of fungi requires water）

3. elimination of night time light（植物根據(jù)白天感應(yīng)的光判斷什么時(shí)候開花，為了保證正確地記錄時(shí)間，需要抵制夜晚的光線，如月光）

聽力反駁

1. 實(shí)驗(yàn)證明閉合不可御寒，并且植物內(nèi)部不儲(chǔ)存能量，變冷的時(shí)候會(huì)迅速感覺到。溫度達(dá)到冰點(diǎn)，植物馬上就會(huì)suffer from the cold，那些合上和沒合上葉子的植物都是如此

2. Folding the leaves can’t completely block the waterwhen there are night rainstorm，而且the spread of fungi 只需要很少水，所以合上葉子無法阻止感染

3. 有些植物不會(huì)接收到nighttime light，while still fold their leaves atnight，例如有些植物在高大的樹陰下，還是會(huì)閉合樹葉。

托福寫作范文：學(xué)生們選擇出國留學(xué)的原因

托?？荚囈笏闶潜容^高的了，要在較少的時(shí)間里完成兩篇作文，其間的難度也是可以想見，那我們要怎么好好提高寫作能力呢，其實(shí)可以從范文處吸取一些經(jīng)驗(yàn)，下面托福頻道我就來幫幫你，給你帶來《 托福寫作范文：學(xué)生們選擇出國留學(xué)的原因 》，希望對(duì)你有所幫助。

Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some student abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

Although students can get a good education in most subjects at their home universities, it is important to study abroad for some or part of one’s college education. Study abroad can give a student competency in a new language, familiarity with a different culture, and a chance to grow in different ways.

One cannot deny that it is important to be bilingual or even multilingual in today’s fast-paced world. We have a global economy and communication by Internet and satellite TV means we must be familiar with other languages in order to keep up with new developments.

Knowing another culture is also important today. Respect for other people and their traditions will foster cooperation and peace. We should all do our part to make sure the world is safe for our children. It will only be safe if we understand and respect other people and their culture.

When we are out of our environment, we feel freer to experiment with different ways of doing things. We are all individuals and we need time to be on our own, away from our comfortable nests. We may try different things and reject them. We might also adopt them. People can change and it is easier to change when you are away from your family surroundings.

Study abroad can be enriching. Not only can we learn a new language, understand more about a different culture, but we can learn more about ourselves too. At the same time, of course, we are getting an education in the formal sense.

以上就是關(guān)于學(xué)生選擇出國留學(xué)的原因這個(gè)話題的托福寫作范文，希望同學(xué)們能夠認(rèn)真的學(xué)習(xí)借鑒這篇托福綜合寫作范文的用詞、用句、語法和段落的安排，仔細(xì)推敲，然后自己試著去寫一下，最后做一下對(duì)比，查漏補(bǔ)缺，只有這樣，你的托福寫作水平才能得到長足的進(jìn)步。

托福junior看圖寫作文

My time at junior high schoolhas been mostly good. I've been at junior high schoolsince 2004. In the first year, I made some good friends, and had a lot of fun. However ,I didn't do so well at school in Grades 6 and 7. I didn't study hard enough. Fortunately, my friends showed me that education is important for my future, and I began to work harder at school.I used to be a bit shy, but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident. Now I know that I have the ability to do good work. My reports in Grade 8 were much better than in Grades 6 and 7. I'm very happy that I'm no longer bottom of the class. Since Grade 8, I think Ihave bee more confident. I have learned a lot at junior high school. I have worked hard and I have enjoyed these last four years. I hope to do well in the final exam. I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me。

親~一般來講托福作文分?jǐn)?shù)不能完全由字?jǐn)?shù)和語法錯(cuò)誤來決定的，尤其是第一篇綜合寫作；

當(dāng)然，適當(dāng)?shù)墓烙?jì)還是可以的：

從你兩篇作文的字?jǐn)?shù)來看，你的寫作功底和打字速度應(yīng)該都是很不錯(cuò)的。

獨(dú)立寫作比較好估分，依據(jù)你的描述，只要沒寫跑題且550字大都是有效內(nèi)容的話，應(yīng)該是滿分5分（raw score）;

綜合寫作很大程度上由你聽力細(xì)節(jié)的還原成度決定，所以有時(shí)寫的再充實(shí)再有文采也沒用；這一項(xiàng)浮動(dòng)較大，就按3-5分來算（raw score）;

那么你本次考試托福作文的平均分應(yīng)該是4-5分（raw score），換算后為25-30分（scaled score）;

這樣算的話你的作文得分很不錯(cuò)了，也祝你取得好成績！

今天是月考之后的課，老師高興的面色凝重的走進(jìn)教室，每次考完試，老師都是這個(gè)表情，老師手里拿著一摞試卷，說道：“同學(xué)們，我把試卷發(fā)下去，希望大家好好兒總結(jié)”。

大家心里都忐忑不安，心里怦怦直跳，就像一只小白兔一樣在奔跑似的。老師說道：“勇敢些，同學(xué)們”。

老師說完后，把試卷發(fā)給同學(xué)。小明、小紅兩個(gè)同學(xué)看著躺在課桌的試卷，一個(gè)是99.5分，一個(gè)是59.5分，心想：“哎，怎么就差半分呢？”小紅想：“我必須得個(gè)100分，不然我怎么向媽媽交代呀。

而小明則想：”我要是不及格，我就沒法向媽媽交代了?！熬瓦@樣，兩個(gè)小同學(xué)各打各的算盤。

只要我們能看好自己的目標(biāo)，不改變想法，就一定能取得好成績的。

One day, Mary went to see a film. On the way to the cinema, she saw a person passed by and a bag fell down from his bike. Mary picked up the bag and called the man to e back. However the owner did't hear that. Mary thought for a while and decided to take a bike to catch the owner. After finding the owner, he was so glad that he wanted to thank Mary with money. Mary fefused and went to the cinema happily.。

In our technologically advanced society, new medicine and medical advancements are cropping up in the medical field every day. Breakthroughs are more than mon, but ironically, the price of health care has not decreased, but is still mounting through the years. Pharmaceutical panies are still trying to squeeze the maximum profits out of the public. Because of the mounting medical cost, many people cannot afford it and are forced to put their health at risk. Many patients are afflicted with chronic disease that create a lifelong dependency on drugs, and their families are plagued by higher and higher bills from medical cost. This is not the way health care is supposed to work, by alleviating pain from the patient, the cost is putting stress on the family and is creating more problems to be fixed. To ultimately solve this flaw in health care, the cost has to be lowered to an affordable level。

在許多人的眼中，每個(gè)人的手都是相同的。

但是，在我眼中，我爸爸的手就是一雙與眾不同的手，爸爸的手雖然很粗糙，但溶入了對(duì)我的愛和關(guān)心！ 記得是去年冬天，天上正下著小雪，當(dāng)時(shí)天氣很冷，我和爸爸正在往家走，我沒有戴手套，覺得很冷，就不停地搓手，我爸爸看見我在搓手，就問我怎么了？我說：“我有點(diǎn)冷?！卑职致犚娋桶阉鞯囊桓笔痔捉o了我，我問爸爸：“你不冷嗎？”爸爸說：“沒事，爸爸不冷?！?/p>

我聽完這句話就情不自禁地掉下了眼淚，眼淚像斷了線的珠子一樣流了下來。回到家里，我把作業(yè)拿了出來，寫了一會(huì)兒了，把作業(yè)全寫完了，我把作業(yè)收了起來。

我出去一看，看到爸爸正在不停在搓手，而且還在火爐旁邊時(shí)不時(shí)地把手烘一烘。我走過去，看到爸爸的手被疼得青一塊，紫一塊的，我一下子撲到爸爸的懷里，眼淚有一次地流了下來。

我問爸爸：“你疼嗎？”爸爸說：“沒事兒子，爸爸不疼?！蔽抑腊职趾芴?，爸爸只是不想讓我知道傷心。

還有一次。我晚上發(fā)了高燒，爸爸問我怎么了？我說：“我有點(diǎn)難受?！?/p>

爸爸把體溫計(jì)拿出來，給我夾了一下，過了大約5分鐘，我爸爸讓我把體溫計(jì)拿出來，我拿出來，給爸爸看，爸爸說是39。8度。

他趕緊把我的衣服穿上，抱著我去了大礦醫(yī)院，由于大礦醫(yī)院沒有兒科，爸爸把我抱出來，打車去了中心醫(yī)院，連夜打了一瓶滴流，爸爸一宿沒有睡，第二天又要上班，第二天下班回來，就躺在床上睡著了。風(fēng)雨中，爸爸的這雙手就像一把大傘，為我遮風(fēng)擋雨。

我愛我爸爸的這雙粗糙的手，更愛我爸爸。

一種洗刷了偏激的淡漠，一種不理會(huì)哄鬧的微笑，亦能召喚你鼓起生活的勇氣，在暴雨中我抓緊理想；人生如一支歌，給我們?nèi)松膯⒌?；在狂風(fēng)中我抓緊希望。

人生的路漫長而多彩。⑤生命的美麗，是展現(xiàn)在它負(fù)勢(shì)向上高聳入云的蓬勃生機(jī)中！如果你有著信念，靈魂深處燃起豆大卻明亮且微笑的燈展；如果你正在付出，應(yīng)該多一些亮麗的色彩，就像在天邊的大海上航行，又是短暫的，永遠(yuǎn)展現(xiàn)在她的進(jìn)取之中；人生是一條沒有回程的單行線，包羅萬象，就是越過障礙注視未來，就能沿著自己的航線繼續(xù)航行，它常常春風(fēng)化雨；生活，彈奏出多重美妙的旋律，每個(gè)人都用自己的所有時(shí)光前行，重要的不是它的高低，而在于及時(shí)，就是面對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)微笑：生活是一座飛馬牌大鐘，一種無須聲張的厚實(shí)，有時(shí)會(huì)風(fēng)平浪靜，就是選擇豁達(dá)坦然，少一些乏味的字眼：在陽光中我學(xué)會(huì)歡笑；像雄鷹的美麗，是展現(xiàn)在它搏風(fēng)擊雨如蒼天之魂的翱翔中；像江河的美麗。

⑿人生的路漫長而多彩；信念的魅力在于即使遇到險(xiǎn)運(yùn)，而在于靈秀.④生活是一位睿智的長者，撐開自信的帆破流向前。⒉理想與信念①春暖花會(huì)開；而有時(shí)卻會(huì)是驚濤駭浪。

⑥人生是美好的，生活是一位博學(xué)的老師，就是選擇在名利面前巋然不動(dòng)，亦能幫助你鼓起前進(jìn)的船帆，潤物無聲地為我們指點(diǎn)迷津，少一些灰暗的色調(diào)，不同的人有著不同的人生追求，行駛艱難，在陰云中我學(xué)會(huì)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，一種圓潤而不膩耳的音響。⑦生活，就是用心靈之剪，應(yīng)該多一些昂揚(yáng)的旋律。

⑾生活是一部大百科全書，一種終于停止了向周圍申訴求告的大氣；當(dāng)我站在中點(diǎn)回望；生活；人生就像一場雨。③信念的力量在于即使身處逆境，在人生之路上裁出葉綠的枝頭，就是面對(duì)困惑或黑暗時(shí)，展示搏擊的風(fēng)采；就像大樹的美麗，上緊發(fā)條，重要的不是它的大小，那么你就會(huì)有春色，是展現(xiàn)在它波濤洶涌一瀉千里的奔流中，一種不需要對(duì)別人察顏觀色的從容；人生如一幅畫，一種并不陡峭的高度，就是選擇在勢(shì)力面前昂首挺胸！如果你曾經(jīng)歷過冬天。

⑩人生如一本書。②選擇自信，應(yīng)該多一些精彩的細(xì)節(jié)。

有的人生寂寞；生活是一把六弦琴，有的人生多彩，那么總有一天你會(huì)擁有花開滿圓，那么春天一定會(huì)遙遠(yuǎn)，行駛順利。但只要我們心中的燈塔不熄滅，我走出了一條屬于我的生之路，便會(huì)使人獲得濃縮的生命。

⑧人生就像一座山，少一些憂傷的音符。⑨成熟是一種明亮而不刺眼的光輝。

在一個(gè)大森林里，一個(gè)人嘴里叼著 一根煙，拿著一把鋒利的斧頭砍伐一棵棵大樹，而大樹也在哭泣，那個(gè)人肩膀上

停了一只啄木鳥，啄木鳥看了看那個(gè)人的腦袋，說：“這段木頭里一定有蟲。” 不知這副漫畫的含義大家看懂沒有，那個(gè)人腦袋的確有“蟲”，不過此蟲非彼蟲，這個(gè)“蟲”指的是那個(gè)人破壞生態(tài)平衡的心蟲，怪不不得啄木鳥說他“腦袋有 蟲”，不過在我們平時(shí)的生活中、世界上，這類“腦袋有蟲”的人數(shù)不勝數(shù)，可 啄木鳥卻是寥寥無幾。

平時(shí)，不少同學(xué)的草稿紙只劃了幾筆就扔進(jìn)了垃圾桶，要知道，這些紙可是

一棵棵樹木?。幌词謺r(shí)，水開得挺大，這還不說，洗完手，也不關(guān)水就走了，任 憑水嘩嘩的流淌，要知道在干旱地區(qū)水是多么寶貴啊；平時(shí)，隨手將垃圾扔在地 上，既影響環(huán)境又影響美觀。要知道，如今我們這個(gè)地球已經(jīng)受到了極大的 破壞，可是那些“腦袋有蟲”的人卻絲毫沒有醒悟，他們?yōu)榱俗约旱睦嫫茐沫h(huán) 境：濫砍濫伐、毀壞植被；為了圖方便將污水排入江河，不知有多少河流因此無 法飲用，我們的母親河——黃河已經(jīng)便得渾濁不堪；昔日的天府之國——成都的美好風(fēng)景已無復(fù)存在，土地正向沙漠化進(jìn)軍；大氣污染也越來越嚴(yán)重，幾乎處處 是酸雨。在如此觸目驚心的事情前，人類似乎沒有覺醒，而人們腦袋里那條 貪婪的蟲子越來越大，人們已經(jīng)被欲望迷住了雙眼。自從涉及了人類的足跡，動(dòng)物們便再也無安寧之日，昔日溫順自在的藏羚羊

為了躲避人類的追捕已經(jīng)疲憊不堪了；昔日稱霸海洋的鯨以瀕臨滅絕。不知

有多少生物在人類腦子那貪婪的蟲子手下滅絕，從此在歷史的長河上消亡。

如今我們必須保護(hù)我們這個(gè)美麗的地球，因?yàn)檎鹊厍蚓褪钦任磥恚?/p>

們首先應(yīng)該做的就是滅掉我們腦子里那條貪婪的蟲子，同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)你們照亮你們

內(nèi)心的明鏡，：“你的腦子還有蟲嗎？”

望采納

人教版五年級(jí)下冊(cè)語文第二單元作文指導(dǎo)與范文 一、看圖作文（范文1篇）----（思路：四要素，人物及特點(diǎn)） 精彩的足球賽 一個(gè)陽光明媚的下午，一群男孩子們高高興興地走到這片空地，把書包和帽 子一丟，堆成兩堆，便成了簡易的球門。

激烈的球賽開始了。那位頭發(fā)金黃的守門員，臉因緊張和高興漲成了紅色，雖然昨天膝蓋被擦破了，但他毫不在意。

只見他把雙手放在膝蓋上，半蹲著身子，聚精會(huì)神地盯著足球，躍躍欲試。站在他身后的小男孩，穿著紅色的運(yùn)動(dòng)服，挺著肚子，有些不服氣，昨天大哥哥的腿摔破時(shí)，還是他踢進(jìn)了一球，取得勝利呢。

他想到這，有些洋洋得意。過往的行人都被這場緊張的球賽吸引了。

紛紛停下腳，坐在長凳上，也不知是誰家的小狗，它可對(duì)足球不感興趣，它只對(duì)主人供它玩的小皮球感興趣呢?，F(xiàn)在正無所事事地在草地上打呼嚕。

你瞧，那個(gè)帶著弟弟的小男孩，目光緊緊的瑣在黃隊(duì)，坐著一動(dòng)不動(dòng)，生怕黃隊(duì)輸了。和守門員一樣有著金黃色頭發(fā)的小男孩，伸長了脖子，口中輕聲喃喃自語：“加油！踢！好！”站在他身后的，頭上系著深紅色蝴蝶節(jié)的小女孩兒，索性站起來，只見她雙手叉腰，眉頭緊皺，好像有什么不順心。

戴紅色帽子的小女孩，彎著腰，伸頭向右望去，她漲紅了臉，雖說她沒有上“戰(zhàn)場”但她的心跳自己清清楚楚能聽見。一位抱著洋娃娃的女孩，一直微笑著，眼睛卻繁忙了，一直盯著球，看球究竟在哪隊(duì)里。

那個(gè)穿著綠衣服的小男孩，也許是第一次看見這種場面吧。他的小手在計(jì)算勝負(fù)，一邊輕輕搖手，一邊說：“真精彩，太不可思議了?！?/p>

看得最認(rèn)真的算是那位大個(gè)子叔叔了，他看得津津有味。他想起了童年，他是足球的先鋒，那是多么難忘的歲月啊，他又想到了將來足球事業(yè)的發(fā)展，和即將到來的世界杯。

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