2021年03月06日托福寫(xiě)作考試真題答案解析

2021年03月06日托福寫(xiě)作考試真題答案解析

3月06號(hào)的托?？荚囈呀?jīng)結(jié)束，這一次的寫(xiě)作部分其實(shí)比上一次要簡(jiǎn)單一些，有的學(xué)生對(duì)于這次的考試題目是比較想要了解的，那么就到來(lái)了解2021年3月06日這一次托福的寫(xiě)作部分真題解析吧。

寫(xiě)作部分：

【綜合寫(xiě)作】

討論某種靈長(zhǎng)類(lèi)動(dòng)物bag oba還是啥到底和chimpanzee哪個(gè)更aggressive

論點(diǎn)：bonobo比較溫和，沒(méi)有chimpanzee那么的aggressive

Reading

1：科學(xué)家們觀察關(guān)進(jìn)籠子中的兩種猩猩，發(fā)現(xiàn)bonobo更加老實(shí)(less agressive) ;

2：bonobo族群里面存在社會(huì)法則(social law) 以保護(hù)bonobo幼崽，因此成年bonobo不會(huì)threaten

bonobo幼崽;

3：chimpanzee會(huì)hunt其他生物的肉吃，而bonobo不會(huì)。Bonobo是素食的，只吃nut和plants。

Listening

1：在實(shí)驗(yàn)室中的動(dòng)物不會(huì)be have like they do in the wild.

2：bonobo族群里也有欺凌弱小的現(xiàn)象，而這個(gè)現(xiàn)象只發(fā)生在研究者不在的時(shí)候，即當(dāng)researcher們都去觀察chimpanzee的時(shí)候。

3：chimpanzee吃別的動(dòng)物是因?yàn)閔uman behavior影響到了他們的素食來(lái)源，迫使他們?nèi)カC殺別的動(dòng)物。并且如果有一天當(dāng)人類(lèi)也影響到bonobo的habitat，bonobo也會(huì)獵殺別的動(dòng)物。

【獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作】

In order to succeed in school or work，the ability to adjustor adapt to changing condition or

circumstance is more important than excellent knowledge in a job or a field of study.

寫(xiě)作備考的方向：

1.范文仿寫(xiě)，勤奮多練

同學(xué)們備考寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可以先以滿分范文為鑒本，比照寫(xiě)作，感受自己與滿分范文之間的區(qū)別，并逐漸改變提升個(gè)人寫(xiě)作技能。備考期間需要勤奮多寫(xiě)機(jī)經(jīng)和TPO題目，每天至少練習(xí)半小時(shí)，每次練習(xí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要集中精神、摒除浮躁才能做到有效。同學(xué)們可以在練習(xí)前關(guān)掉手機(jī)，電視，使用Write Room等寫(xiě)作軟件，這種無(wú)干擾界面的全屏模式，讓考生更專(zhuān)注寫(xiě)作練習(xí)上。同時(shí)，定好詳細(xì)計(jì)劃且每周必練一套TPO這種官方模擬題，體驗(yàn)在電腦屏幕上出現(xiàn)秒數(shù)倒數(shù)情況下打字寫(xiě)作的仿真考場(chǎng)感受。最后練完，可以將作文復(fù)制到word中檢查糾正拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。

2. 博覽廣采，勤于積累

建議考生閱讀《ETS第四版托福官方指南》中的大量官方滿分范文，和堅(jiān)持閱讀一些美國(guó)教育體制下的初高中及大學(xué)Reading List上的推薦名著或暢銷(xiāo)英文讀物，觀而有選，取而有擇。同時(shí)，在這些資源中收集有關(guān)托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作?？荚掝}(教育、科技、工作、個(gè)人生活等)的名人或個(gè)人例子，并且從中摘錄一些豐富地道的短語(yǔ)和句型?！白x書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神”，如果沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言的積累輸入，怎么可能會(huì)有寫(xiě)作輸出? 最后，提醒廣大托福考生堅(jiān)持每日練習(xí)寫(xiě)作、整體錯(cuò)題集，體會(huì)課上學(xué)的方法技巧，大道一定至簡(jiǎn)。

托福作文考試范文 挫折經(jīng)歷的價(jià)值

托?？荚嚨淖魑暮苤匾?，學(xué)習(xí)別人的范文是進(jìn)步的基礎(chǔ)，出國(guó)人士似乎很多關(guān)心這個(gè)，和托福欄目一起來(lái)了解了解托福作文考試之挫折經(jīng)歷有什么價(jià)值，歡迎閱讀。

托?？荚囎魑念}目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

托?？荚囎魑膮⒖挤治觯?/p>

舉一些例子支持題目中的觀點(diǎn)，確實(shí)有些痛苦經(jīng)歷對(duì)將來(lái)毫無(wú)幫助。

托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖迹?/p>

Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we will face numerous difficulties, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.

Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, "no pain no gain." For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties. And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problem solving skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.

In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.

2021年3月10日托福寫(xiě)作考試部分預(yù)測(cè)

有很多學(xué)生在準(zhǔn)備托福的時(shí)候會(huì)先看看一些題目的預(yù)測(cè)，這樣既可以大概的估計(jì)考試題目的方向，自己也好提前有準(zhǔn)備，那么就到來(lái)看看2021年03月10日的托福寫(xiě)作考試的部分預(yù)測(cè)吧。

獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作：

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement： It＇s a waste of money for Government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.

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Which kind of professors will you choose when selecting the courses？1，Some professors who are voted to be the most popular one？2，Some professors who are rewarded of outstanding research？

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？It is the best way for teachers to help students become more interested in a subject by explaining how this subject can help students live better outside of the school.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？Government should provide free access to the internet； the individual should access to the internet without paying anything.

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Sometimes we are assigned to work in a group on a project. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？The group will be helped more by person who will be willing to do what other group members want than by person who often strongly insists that things should be done in a way that is different from what the group wants to do.

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Which kind of professors will you choose when selecting the courses？1. Some professors who are voted to be the most popular one 2. Some professors who are rewarded of outstanding research

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？It is more effective if teachers let students learn record lecture before class and discuss and practice during class.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？It is important to have rules about the types of clothes that people wear in their workplace and at school.

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Some people think it is the best approach for students to learn if school start the day at a early time in the morning. But someone think the school should start the day at late time. Which one do you prefer？

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Which one of the following is the best approach to reduce living expense？

A. share the rent with roommate B. do not buy the latest technology products like cellphone frequently C. cook food at home. 160311CN

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？Students do reading by their own personality is as important as，or more important than reading assigned by teachers.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？People should buy the products made in their own country.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？When working on a project，it’s better for classmates or colleagues to communicate face to face than sending emails.

　托福寫(xiě)作的結(jié)構(gòu)提升方式：

方法一、比較（contrast& comparison）

在托福大作文的寫(xiě)作中，考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比較，相同關(guān)系叫對(duì)照（comparison），相反關(guān)系叫對(duì)比（contrast）。此類(lèi)論證我們重點(diǎn)掌握一些對(duì)比對(duì)照關(guān)系的連詞：

In contrast，by contrast，on the contrary，while，whereas Likewise，similarly.

方法二、引用（quotation）

在托福大作文寫(xiě)作論證的過(guò)程中，表達(dá)一些觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，如果能拿名人名言來(lái)進(jìn)行論證則更有說(shuō)服力，說(shuō)明某位名人的觀點(diǎn)和你的觀點(diǎn)是達(dá)成一致，形成共鳴的。但引用要求考生要有相當(dāng)大的積累，由于備考時(shí)間緊迫，此類(lèi)論證可以少用。此外，專(zhuān)家提醒考生要緊記，引用名人名言就意味著引用別人的觀點(diǎn)，所以只要引兩到三句起到論證自己觀點(diǎn)的作用的話就可以了，點(diǎn)到為止，而不是中文寫(xiě)作中，引用越多越好。

方法三、讓步（makingconcession）

讓步的論證是中國(guó)考生較陌生的一個(gè)概念，其實(shí)在學(xué)狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，我們就學(xué)過(guò)讓步的關(guān)系，先退一步承認(rèn)一個(gè)與自己觀點(diǎn)相反的事實(shí)，再轉(zhuǎn)折給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，否定前者。句型如下：

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that?…

As is granted/ Admittedly，…

Opponents would argue that?…

從上面的總結(jié)我們就可以看出來(lái)，托福大作文主體部分的寫(xiě)作方法是有很多種的，但是復(fù)雜一些的托福寫(xiě)作方法總是會(huì)更容易吸引考官的眼球而且也更容易達(dá)到寫(xiě)作的字?jǐn)?shù)要求，所以建議大家都向最后一種表達(dá)方式靠攏。

2021年3月21日托福寫(xiě)作考試真題答案

托福考試是大家出國(guó)留學(xué)的一項(xiàng)英語(yǔ)類(lèi)考試，想要在托福寫(xiě)作中拿到高分，考前的備考是很重要的，下面是整理的3月21日托福寫(xiě)作考試真題答案，來(lái)看看吧！
2021年3月21日托福寫(xiě)作考試真題答案
綜合寫(xiě)作
話題分類(lèi)：藝術(shù)類(lèi)。
考題回憶：
總論點(diǎn)：是否能夠解釋 Elizabeth Playhouse 的設(shè)計(jì)。
閱讀部分：伊麗莎白playhouse的設(shè)計(jì)，為什么是圓的沒(méi)有屋頂，有3 個(gè)假說(shuō)。
原因 1：受羅馬建筑影響，因?yàn)榱_馬設(shè)計(jì)師的一本書(shū)在當(dāng)時(shí)出版了，那些英國(guó)的建筑師很 熟悉這本書(shū)；
原因 2：受運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)影響，主要是說(shuō)因?yàn)橐郧榜R戲團(tuán)沒(méi)有屋頂；
原因 3：因?yàn)橘Y金問(wèn)題，financial problem，為了省錢(qián)，因?yàn)閳A頂可以容納更多人。
聽(tīng)力部分
觀點(diǎn) 1：羅馬建筑相關(guān)的書(shū)都是拉丁文寫(xiě)的，只有內(nèi)行人看得懂，但是伊麗莎白的建筑者都是商人和木匠，他們沒(méi)有受過(guò)相關(guān)教育，看不懂；
觀點(diǎn) 2：馬戲團(tuán)運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)的設(shè)計(jì)是為了保護(hù)觀眾，隔開(kāi)動(dòng)物和運(yùn)動(dòng)員，但如果伊麗莎白的建 筑利用相同設(shè)計(jì)會(huì)讓觀眾看不見(jiàn)舞臺(tái)；
觀點(diǎn) 3：并不是資金問(wèn)題，因?yàn)闆](méi)有屋頂，下雨天或者風(fēng)大的天反而沒(méi)有觀眾看表演，反而會(huì)虧損，reduce income。
參考范文：
The reading passage and lecture debate on the design of Elizabeth Playhouse. The reading passage proposes three theories to account for the lack of roof in the desigh，which are all contradicted by the following lecture.
The first theory in the reading suggests that it was under the influence of Roman architecture，based on the fact that a book on Roman architecture was published back then，which was popular among architects in Britain. Also，the house resembles Roman structures with arched dome. However，the lecturer challenges the theory by pointing out that those in charge of the construction were all merchants with little education background. The book was written in Latin，which can be only read by well-educated people，rather than merchants.
The second theory in the reading proposes that it was influenced by the design of circus，since it is the first to adopt the dome design. Yet the lecture states that circus is often surrounded by fences，which keep animals in captivity. Also，audiences’ views will be blocked with the fences.
The last theory，according to the reading，claims that the design is adopted with economic benefit. Without roof，sunlight can come into the structure，reducing the need for candles. On the contrary，the professor in the lecture contends that the roofless building will be easily bothered by severe weather conditions. On a rainy day，the ground will get wet，resulting in fewer audiences and lower profit.
獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作
話題分類(lèi)：媒體類(lèi)。
考題回憶：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？Movies are only worth watching when they can teach us about things in real life.
解題思路：這道題的觀點(diǎn)是只有符合現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的電影才值得看。在討論這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可以結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)歷，考慮這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性和不足。符合現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的電影更加感人，能給人帶來(lái)教育和啟迪，也能具有更強(qiáng)的社會(huì)影響力。
但是這類(lèi)電影可能 比較枯燥，吸引力不夠強(qiáng)。另外，其他類(lèi)型的電影比如科幻片、歷史片創(chuàng)意更加獨(dú)特，內(nèi)容更加具有吸引力，能夠收到大眾的歡迎。但是可能娛樂(lè)性較強(qiáng)，而現(xiàn)實(shí)意義不大。
參考范文：
For decades，films，as the main source of entertainment and inspiration，have always stood in the limelight of public attention. However，people’s views differ as to whether citizens should only watch those movies that can teach something in real life. As I see it，I disagree that films that worth watching have to teach a lesson about real life； instead，a variety of reasons should be taken into account when picking films to watch.
To begin with，the greatest of all benefits of watching a movie is that it entertains people. Be it comedy or science-fiction，movies are a medium of leisure and recreation for every individual ranging from the young to the elder. Take my father as an example. He feels very tired after the full devotion to his career in a week and there is no time for the gym and outdoor activities just because of his busy work schedules. Then，on weekends，he always chooses to lie on the sofa munching on some chips and sipping his favorite soda，and watch all kinds of movies. Engrossed in a comedy，he laughs heartily and feels relaxed. If it is a horror movie，he feels excited and scared，emotions that he hardly experiences during his workdays. After watching a movie，he becomes refreshed and more energetic. Therefore，movies serving as recreation for people are also worth watching.
Besides，watching movies helps people improve their relationship with others. More often than not，what audiences are more focused on during the process of watching movies is the time they spend with their friends or family rather than the well-orchestrated plots or the life lessons they might disclose. While watching movies with others，people can share the same excitement and pleasure with them，which are opportunities to strengthen the bonds with them. My own experience can well illustrate this point. In high school，I usually went to the cinema with my friends. Whatever the genre was，we enjoyed the time staying together. We spent quality time while laughing out loud at hilarious scenes and impersonating the characters in the movies. We also relived the experience together while talking about our favorite scenes and lines. The movies were nothing about our life； however，while watching them，we felt our mental distance shortened and our friendship strengthened. Accordingly，the importance of watching movies in terms of helping strengthen bonds between people should not be disregarded.
To sum up，given the discussion above，we can firmly come to the conclusion that it is too unilateral to say only those movies telling us important life stories are worth watching. Rather，movies that can entertain audiences and provide viewers with a chance to stay with each other are also welcomed.
托福寫(xiě)作答題步驟
綜合寫(xiě)作答題步驟
1.閱讀文章
需要大家提升快速閱讀能力，首先讀懂文章主干（文章觀點(diǎn)+論點(diǎn)），其次理解閱讀細(xì)節(jié)部分，開(kāi)頭段快速看背景，這樣可以幫助理解文章觀點(diǎn)，中間段可以觀察論點(diǎn)后細(xì)節(jié)部分，幫助更好理解文章論點(diǎn)。
2.聽(tīng)力材料（重點(diǎn)）
捕捉聽(tīng)力文章主干（容易），關(guān)鍵是捕捉聽(tīng)力反駁細(xì)節(jié)（難度），盡量的聽(tīng)見(jiàn)每一句反駁細(xì)節(jié)（更大難度）
3.寫(xiě)文章
描述閱讀以及聽(tīng)力對(duì)應(yīng)關(guān)系，重點(diǎn)描述聽(tīng)力內(nèi)容，熟悉模版。描述過(guò)程中總結(jié)精煉閱讀內(nèi)容。
獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作答題步驟
1.審題：瀏覽題干，判斷題型；根據(jù)題型，決定思路；根據(jù)觀點(diǎn)，給出論點(diǎn)
2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)：文章需要有很好的結(jié)構(gòu)組織性；針對(duì)這一點(diǎn)希望大家在實(shí)際寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程里注意兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，首先是文章整體的結(jié)構(gòu)性，具體表現(xiàn)為：要求開(kāi)頭段表明文章觀點(diǎn)，中間段表明論點(diǎn)與結(jié)尾段重述觀點(diǎn)以及總結(jié)論點(diǎn)。第二點(diǎn)，段落內(nèi)結(jié)構(gòu)組織性：要求有論點(diǎn)以及對(duì)應(yīng)的例子來(lái)進(jìn)行支撐。

2013新托福考試真題：2013.3.30托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作范文

托福獨(dú)立作文題目：

Even though many people from different countries care about environment problems (pollution, global warming), the environmental situation can’t be improved in the future.

解析：

【題目翻譯】

即使現(xiàn)在很多國(guó)家的很多人都非常關(guān)心類(lèi)似于污染和全球變暖這樣的環(huán)境問(wèn)題，但是環(huán)境狀況在將來(lái)還是不會(huì)得到改善的。你同意還是不同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)?

【話題分析】

此題考查的是環(huán)境話題，其實(shí)，教育、環(huán)境、媒體、個(gè)人成功、工作等話題都是托?？荚嚨闹仡^戲，其中教育、個(gè)人成功和工作一直名列前茅，但是環(huán)境話題的再次出現(xiàn)，也是給各位考生提了個(gè)醒，要注意老話題的復(fù)習(xí)，包括素材和詞匯的復(fù)習(xí)。

【歷年相關(guān)考題】

大陸考題：

2008.6.22-The most important thing that the government can do in improving health care is to clean the environment.

2008年11月22日—Instead of spending money on the exploration of outer space, the government should spend money on the improvement of the environment.

北美考題：

2008.1.12-The government should focus more on environmental problems and less on economic development.

2008.3.14-The environmental issue is too complex to be solved by the individuals.

2008.4.26-The government should give priority to improving healthcare than to solving environmental problems.

【思路拓展】

如果同意上面的觀點(diǎn)，那就是認(rèn)為：即使現(xiàn)在很多國(guó)家關(guān)心環(huán)境問(wèn)題，但問(wèn)題還是得不到改善，可以有以下理由：

1. 很多國(guó)家只是關(guān)注(care about / pay more attention on …)，或者可以理解成是意識(shí)到環(huán)境問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性(realize the importance of environment problems)，但是都不采取具體的行動(dòng)(but they have not taken practical and effective measures)，如此下去，環(huán)境問(wèn)題也不會(huì)得到改善。比方說(shuō)，由政府間氣候變化專(zhuān)家委員會(huì)(Intergovernmental Panelon Climate Change)制定的京都議定書(shū)(Kyoto protocol)，旨在減少二氧化碳排放量(reduce the emission of carbon dioxide)，減輕全球變暖，都改了好幾次了，但是全球變暖未見(jiàn)改善。

2. 很多國(guó)家，尤其是發(fā)展中國(guó)家和不發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家，為了發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，大量的挖掘地球的資源(excavate all kinds of resource)，排放廢氣廢物(contamination)，因此，他們是在以犧牲環(huán)境為代價(jià)來(lái)發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)(develop a country’s economy at the cost of environment damage)，如此以來(lái)，環(huán)境問(wèn)題不僅不會(huì)改善，而且還會(huì)惡化(deteriorate)。

3. 很多污染單一國(guó)家或地區(qū)很難獨(dú)立解決(it is too complicated for individual country to solve some environmental problems)。很多污染都是沒(méi)有國(guó)界的(boundless)，即使有的國(guó)家在關(guān)注，甚至采取行動(dòng)，如果不把站在國(guó)際的角度上去解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題 (tackle this problem at an international level)，也是很難有成效的。

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