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3月06號的托??荚囈呀?jīng)結(jié)束,這一次的寫作部分其實比上一次要簡單一些,有的學(xué)生對于這次的考試題目是比較想要了解的,那么就到來了解2021年3月06日這一次托福的寫作部分真題解析吧。
寫作部分:
【綜合寫作】
討論某種靈長類動物bag oba還是啥到底和chimpanzee哪個更aggressive
論點:bonobo比較溫和,沒有chimpanzee那么的aggressive
Reading
1:科學(xué)家們觀察關(guān)進籠子中的兩種猩猩,發(fā)現(xiàn)bonobo更加老實(less agressive) ;
2:bonobo族群里面存在社會法則(social law) 以保護bonobo幼崽,因此成年bonobo不會threaten
bonobo幼崽;
3:chimpanzee會hunt其他生物的肉吃,而bonobo不會。Bonobo是素食的,只吃nut和plants。
Listening
1:在實驗室中的動物不會be have like they do in the wild.
2:bonobo族群里也有欺凌弱小的現(xiàn)象,而這個現(xiàn)象只發(fā)生在研究者不在的時候,即當(dāng)researcher們都去觀察chimpanzee的時候。
3:chimpanzee吃別的動物是因為human behavior影響到了他們的素食來源,迫使他們?nèi)カC殺別的動物。并且如果有一天當(dāng)人類也影響到bonobo的habitat,bonobo也會獵殺別的動物。
【獨立寫作】
In order to succeed in school or work,the ability to adjustor adapt to changing condition or
circumstance is more important than excellent knowledge in a job or a field of study.
寫作備考的方向:
1.范文仿寫,勤奮多練
同學(xué)們備考寫作時,可以先以滿分范文為鑒本,比照寫作,感受自己與滿分范文之間的區(qū)別,并逐漸改變提升個人寫作技能。備考期間需要勤奮多寫機經(jīng)和TPO題目,每天至少練習(xí)半小時,每次練習(xí)寫作時需要集中精神、摒除浮躁才能做到有效。同學(xué)們可以在練習(xí)前關(guān)掉手機,電視,使用Write Room等寫作軟件,這種無干擾界面的全屏模式,讓考生更專注寫作練習(xí)上。同時,定好詳細計劃且每周必練一套TPO這種官方模擬題,體驗在電腦屏幕上出現(xiàn)秒數(shù)倒數(shù)情況下打字寫作的仿真考場感受。最后練完,可以將作文復(fù)制到word中檢查糾正拼寫錯誤。
2. 博覽廣采,勤于積累
建議考生閱讀《ETS第四版托福官方指南》中的大量官方滿分范文,和堅持閱讀一些美國教育體制下的初高中及大學(xué)Reading List上的推薦名著或暢銷英文讀物,觀而有選,取而有擇。同時,在這些資源中收集有關(guān)托福獨立寫作??荚掝}(教育、科技、工作、個人生活等)的名人或個人例子,并且從中摘錄一些豐富地道的短語和句型?!白x書破萬卷,下筆如有神”,如果沒有語言的積累輸入,怎么可能會有寫作輸出? 最后,提醒廣大托??忌鷪猿置咳站毩?xí)寫作、整體錯題集,體會課上學(xué)的方法技巧,大道一定至簡。
托??荚嚨淖魑暮苤匾瑢W(xué)習(xí)別人的范文是進步的基礎(chǔ),出國人士似乎很多關(guān)心這個,和托福欄目一起來了解了解托福作文考試之挫折經(jīng)歷有什么價值,歡迎閱讀。
托??荚囎魑念}目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
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舉一些例子支持題目中的觀點,確實有些痛苦經(jīng)歷對將來毫無幫助。
托福考試作文范文參考:
Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we will face numerous difficulties, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.
Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, "no pain no gain." For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties. And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problem solving skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.
In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.
有很多學(xué)生在準備托福的時候會先看看一些題目的預(yù)測,這樣既可以大概的估計考試題目的方向,自己也好提前有準備,那么就到來看看2021年03月10日的托福寫作考試的部分預(yù)測吧。
獨立寫作:
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It's a waste of money for Government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.
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Which kind of professors will you choose when selecting the courses?1,Some professors who are voted to be the most popular one?2,Some professors who are rewarded of outstanding research?
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is the best way for teachers to help students become more interested in a subject by explaining how this subject can help students live better outside of the school.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Government should provide free access to the internet; the individual should access to the internet without paying anything.
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Sometimes we are assigned to work in a group on a project. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The group will be helped more by person who will be willing to do what other group members want than by person who often strongly insists that things should be done in a way that is different from what the group wants to do.
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Which kind of professors will you choose when selecting the courses?1. Some professors who are voted to be the most popular one 2. Some professors who are rewarded of outstanding research
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more effective if teachers let students learn record lecture before class and discuss and practice during class.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to have rules about the types of clothes that people wear in their workplace and at school.
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Some people think it is the best approach for students to learn if school start the day at a early time in the morning. But someone think the school should start the day at late time. Which one do you prefer?
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Which one of the following is the best approach to reduce living expense?
A. share the rent with roommate B. do not buy the latest technology products like cellphone frequently C. cook food at home. 160311CN
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students do reading by their own personality is as important as,or more important than reading assigned by teachers.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should buy the products made in their own country.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When working on a project,it’s better for classmates or colleagues to communicate face to face than sending emails.
托福寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)提升方式:
方法一、比較(contrast& comparison)
在托福大作文的寫作中,考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比較,相同關(guān)系叫對照(comparison),相反關(guān)系叫對比(contrast)。此類論證我們重點掌握一些對比對照關(guān)系的連詞:
In contrast,by contrast,on the contrary,while,whereas Likewise,similarly.
方法二、引用(quotation)
在托福大作文寫作論證的過程中,表達一些觀點的時候,如果能拿名人名言來進行論證則更有說服力,說明某位名人的觀點和你的觀點是達成一致,形成共鳴的。但引用要求考生要有相當(dāng)大的積累,由于備考時間緊迫,此類論證可以少用。此外,專家提醒考生要緊記,引用名人名言就意味著引用別人的觀點,所以只要引兩到三句起到論證自己觀點的作用的話就可以了,點到為止,而不是中文寫作中,引用越多越好。
方法三、讓步(makingconcession)
讓步的論證是中國考生較陌生的一個概念,其實在學(xué)狀語從句時,我們就學(xué)過讓步的關(guān)系,先退一步承認一個與自己觀點相反的事實,再轉(zhuǎn)折給出自己的觀點,否定前者。句型如下:
Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that?…
As is granted/ Admittedly,…
Opponents would argue that?…
從上面的總結(jié)我們就可以看出來,托福大作文主體部分的寫作方法是有很多種的,但是復(fù)雜一些的托福寫作方法總是會更容易吸引考官的眼球而且也更容易達到寫作的字數(shù)要求,所以建議大家都向最后一種表達方式靠攏。
托福獨立作文題目:
Even though many people from different countries care about environment problems (pollution, global warming), the environmental situation can’t be improved in the future.
解析:
【題目翻譯】
即使現(xiàn)在很多國家的很多人都非常關(guān)心類似于污染和全球變暖這樣的環(huán)境問題,但是環(huán)境狀況在將來還是不會得到改善的。你同意還是不同意這個觀點?
【話題分析】
此題考查的是環(huán)境話題,其實,教育、環(huán)境、媒體、個人成功、工作等話題都是托福考試的重頭戲,其中教育、個人成功和工作一直名列前茅,但是環(huán)境話題的再次出現(xiàn),也是給各位考生提了個醒,要注意老話題的復(fù)習(xí),包括素材和詞匯的復(fù)習(xí)。
【歷年相關(guān)考題】
大陸考題:
2008.6.22-The most important thing that the government can do in improving health care is to clean the environment.
2008年11月22日—Instead of spending money on the exploration of outer space, the government should spend money on the improvement of the environment.
北美考題:
2008.1.12-The government should focus more on environmental problems and less on economic development.
2008.3.14-The environmental issue is too complex to be solved by the individuals.
2008.4.26-The government should give priority to improving healthcare than to solving environmental problems.
【思路拓展】
如果同意上面的觀點,那就是認為:即使現(xiàn)在很多國家關(guān)心環(huán)境問題,但問題還是得不到改善,可以有以下理由:
1. 很多國家只是關(guān)注(care about / pay more attention on …),或者可以理解成是意識到環(huán)境問題的嚴重性(realize the importance of environment problems),但是都不采取具體的行動(but they have not taken practical and effective measures),如此下去,環(huán)境問題也不會得到改善。比方說,由政府間氣候變化專家委員會(Intergovernmental Panelon Climate Change)制定的京都議定書(Kyoto protocol),旨在減少二氧化碳排放量(reduce the emission of carbon dioxide),減輕全球變暖,都改了好幾次了,但是全球變暖未見改善。
2. 很多國家,尤其是發(fā)展中國家和不發(fā)達國家,為了發(fā)展經(jīng)濟,大量的挖掘地球的資源(excavate all kinds of resource),排放廢氣廢物(contamination),因此,他們是在以犧牲環(huán)境為代價來發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(develop a country’s economy at the cost of environment damage),如此以來,環(huán)境問題不僅不會改善,而且還會惡化(deteriorate)。
3. 很多污染單一國家或地區(qū)很難獨立解決(it is too complicated for individual country to solve some environmental problems)。很多污染都是沒有國界的(boundless),即使有的國家在關(guān)注,甚至采取行動,如果不把站在國際的角度上去解決這個問題 (tackle this problem at an international level),也是很難有成效的。
按照上面的具體分析,可以按照最簡單的三點五段式來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)。