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今天老師為雅思考生們帶來10月11日雅思寫作大作文分析及范例,希望能給雅思考生們帶來幫助。More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore, people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

今天老師為雅思考生們帶來10月11日雅思寫作大作文分析及范例,希望能給雅思考生們帶來幫助。
More people are using mobile (cell) phones and computers to communicate. Therefore, people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2014.10.11)
解析:
本題爭議
-手機和電腦的使用會使人們喪失面對面交流的能力
不同意
-手機和電腦給人們提供先進的溝通方式,和面對面交流類似
-手機和電腦給人們帶來大量的新信息,促進面對面溝通
同意
-過度使用會導致沉溺在虛擬世界,造成交流障礙
雅思寫作范例:
In consideration of the fact that the convenience of communicating via mobiles and computers has overshadowed the traditional way of communication, some people argue that people are being deprived of the ability to communicate face to face. Personally, I am not in favor of this view.
First of all, advanced means of communication realized through mobiles and communication have largely facilitated the exchanges of ideas among people. For example, communication tools such as video-chatting enable people to interact with each other anywhere and anytime possible. As a result, people could frequently experience the interchange of information that shows great resemblance to meeting each other, which obviously would contribute to the enhancement of ability to communicate with others face to face.
Another significant reason is that the popularization of the Internet provides people with the access to large amounts of information through cellphones and computers. Consequently, people could obtain various kinds of information which has always been an essential part of daily conversations. Conversely, if people were not exposed to mobiles and computers, they would not gain up-to-date news and thus lose the opportunity to share the latest information with others, which would lead to increased barriers and degraded skills of communication.
However, it has to be admitted that mobiles and computers may also give rise to communicative disorders. In fact, excessive use of them in a long term would indulge people in the virtual world. What’s worse, it is probable that they would be discouraged from meeting people and not be adapted to communicating with others face to face. only in this case would mobiles and computers weaken the ability of communication among people.
To conclude, despite the negative effects of cellphones and computers, I still hold the opinion that face-to-face communicative ability has been improved rather than impeded because of the effective communication tools and diversified types of information made possible by mobiles and computers.
以上就是名師為考生們帶來的10月11日寫作大作文分析及反例,希望能給雅思考生們帶來幫助。
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